Reviews for Forever at Last
steffi chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
wow, I'm getting "and then"-sick! It makes me really dizzy.

The idea sounds interesting - at least as far as I could stand the "and then".
just another fan chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
That was cute

Love ya
ty101 chapter 8 . 2/9/2008
hurry and write please
topazforever chapter 8 . 10/14/2007
hey please keep writing i love your story.

OMG chapter 8 . 7/5/2007
Oh i liked bella as the bad ass but yea glad bella and edward got to be happy but are you going to have a sequel cause what happened to Kye or is there no story there?
fpcj chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
overall this chapter was goog but...

"Bella am coming” eveytime its supposed to be "I'am" you writ "Am" need to work on that

keep on writing
JesiMarie93 chapter 8 . 3/11/2007
lve it
ALittleMoonlightMoment chapter 8 . 3/11/2007
Ok this was a very interesting plot, but your grammer and use of words is, I'm sorry but, awful. You need to work on that.
Audra Manoso chapter 8 . 3/11/2007
aw that was cute
FallenintoHavok chapter 8 . 3/11/2007

That was so freakin cute!

Alice he meh laugh hella :)

I love ure cute lovey dovey scenes!

But what no actual lovin'...haha jk!

Loved it!

can't tell you sorry chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Do you have a beta? you should. the story line is great, but you should do grammer& spell checks before submitting a chapter or evan just have someone read it over once or twice. It really is confusing that insted of using (I'm) you use (am).
foreveravampirelover chapter 8 . 3/11/2007
Oh my! love it! update!
saphyree chapter 8 . 3/10/2007
123kit-Kat123 chapter 7 . 3/10/2007
write more please! come on i know i'm like a twilight freak or something but i need to know what hapens to bella. dose she go to edward? dose he find her? do they fall in love? what is going on i need to know!
JesiMarie93 chapter 7 . 3/9/2007
love it
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