Reviews for Silence in the Night
Wistful-Stargazer chapter 7 . 7/1/2009
Why is it that not one of the Marauders have yet to make mention that they have noticed on the Marauders' Map that Jane Talmadge shows up as Hermione Granger?


'Jane returned to her book and looked back under 'Bitten' to where it said 'vampires.' Next to it, it said page 616. Jane flipped to it, maybe it would answer the mission. But the page was blank except for a neat little script that ran along the bottom of the page. 'Moved to diary.' Jane frowned and closed the book, so much help that was.'

[Hmm, the note in the book, made by Professor Crifasi, that said that her notes under 'Bitten', then 'vampires' have been 'moved to diary'... would that be the same diary that Hermione was told to find back in chapter one?]


Aww, how sad that Hermione/Jane, when talking to Remus about the future, burst into tears. It was kind of Remus to have attempted to comfort her. Poor Remus to be bummed out for feeling that he is responsible for causing H/Jane to cry.


It was very naughty of Sirius to have thrown Hermione/Jane into the lake and then steal a kiss.


'She brushed her fingers over her lips where Sirius's warmth once lingered. A part of her couldn't believe what had just happened and was appalled, but the other half was screaming with happiness. A odd feeling hit her in the stomach when she thought of how close she came to kissing Remus in the library after what had just happened in the lake. She was staring silently dazed by the kiss.'

[I'm wondering if she is feeling regret for not having followed-through on kissing Remus in the library? Is she perhaps feeling guilty and/or sad too?]


Well done-keep up the good work!
Wistful-Stargazer chapter 6 . 6/30/2009
Dang, so close and yet so far... Remus and H/Jane should have kissed!


Hmm, maybe they will in the next chapter? That would be very good.

So the D.A.D.A. teacher is a vampire-cool!

Well done-keep up the good work!
Wistful-Stargazer chapter 5 . 6/30/2009
Okay... I'm taking it to mean that Chuck is bisexual and that she was in a relationship with Alisha at the time in which Sirius went to make his move onto Chuck.

A very dramatic chapter-well done-keep up the good work!
Wistful-Stargazer chapter 4 . 6/30/2009
Hmm, I take it that Professor Crifasi is a vampire. Then again, I could be wrong.

OK, Snape was a total arse to H/Jane. Sheesh, he doesn't even try to make allies in other houses-fool.

I love how Remus got the tingles when H/Jane put her hand on his shoulder prior to banishing the frogs.


Aww, it was so cute that when Remus went to ask H/Jane to go with him to Hogsmeade, she was fast asleep upon his shoulder.

This next bit is even sweeter...

'Jane and Remus were asleep on the couch, Jane’s head on his chest, and his head on top of hers. His arm wrapped around her waist and her arm wrapped around him. It was the sweetest thing to see. James was glowing with pride for his friend, Sirius was happy for him, yet still something about this bothered him a bit, but he tried to ignore it.'

Hmm, I wonder if Sirius is feeling jealousy, sadness, disappointment, and/or something else.

Well done-great story so far-keep up the good work!
Wistful-Stargazer chapter 3 . 6/30/2009
Remus is a total sweetheart to have written Hermione a letter to reassure her that he would be there for her.

It was really too bad that Remus didn't stick around to get the story behind Sirius coming back holding her hand and both smiling.

Bummer about the cow in 5th year (Remus' girlfriend) that freaked out when told about Remus' furry little problem.

James is a good friend to Remus to tell Sirius that Remus is interested in her, and then later to tell Remus about what really happened between her and Sirius.

Well done-keep up the good work!
Wistful-Stargazer chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
*::Cheshire cat's grin::*

Hermione is one lucky gal to have landed on the young and sexy Remus Lupin, and to get on well with him and Sirius too.

Great chapter-well written-keep up the good work!
Wistful-Stargazer chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
'“You will be meeting someone who will escort you to Hogwarts, they know nothing of this. So you must keep everything to yourself. You know what happens to people who meddle with time and get caught. There was an enchantment to ensure you land with some one who will help you no matter what. Very old magic, and very powerful.”'

Hmm, I wonder who it is that Hermione will be landing next to that is to help her.

This story sounds very exciting so far.

Keep up the good work!
Caramel Crazy chapter 8 . 11/16/2007
Wonderful story, I love it! Update soon, please!
Hazelcloud chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
I really really like this story!

Please update soon!
false account chapter 8 . 6/9/2007
It's a really good story!

Keep writing!
LixXxa chapter 8 . 5/16/2007
i luv ur story. update!
Growl Snarl chapter 8 . 4/1/2007
Cool story so far. I've got a comment on chuck though. earlier, you had her wanting to change/mature (Including her name) but you still have everyone addressing her as Chuck. It's even in the non- dialog. I don't know if you just had her realize that she still is Chuck, and so kept it the same, or whatever.

Anyways. Update soon.
useless otaku chapter 8 . 3/30/2007
Wow, I'm truely addicted to this story. You know like a vampire is to blood... well, anyway, please update soon, I have no life and need to see what happens.
M03 chapter 8 . 3/20/2007
Oh, this story is really good! It's all just so.. juicy! ;)
Butterflywing chapter 2 . 3/20/2007
What does the weird spell in chapter two mean? Some part of it means 'Universal Time' in Japanese... but after that I'm lost. What does it mean?
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