Reviews for dot dot dot
XoXoXKaylaIsRawrXoXoX chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Oh my gosh, that was funny! XD

How could he be fourteen and not know where babies come from!
Oustiti chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Lol, the stroke. Ow god this is hilarious, I just can't stop laughing.
Dark Hooded Eriol the Magician chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
The sentence in the end is so funny. But my brain exploded in some point. XD Hahahahahah! Good job!
TemariOfTheSand92 chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
LOL This was hilarious! Great story.

By the way, I have a friend who is as pure as Al. She is way too innocent for a girl her age. XD

And Im like Ed here..too perverted or whatever for my own good.

*sigh* why me?
DeletedAnon chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
My bio teacher was like, Welcome to Vagina 101. ㅡ0ㅡ She had no qualms about this at all...went about it in a technical, matter-of-fact way.

Anyways, I love how you immediately thought of this when the theme was 'Creation'. Love the title too, by the way. It describes the mood of this fic perfectly...but it seems fitting that Al is so pure like that...
BlackWyvern chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Awsome! I loved the end, "yeah. a stork"... sorry...
Rikku-Crowley chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
xD I liked it Envy-chan. P It gave me a good giggle that I really needed.
ChibiLaryla chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
o_o Wow Katie. xD That was great. Dx Al needs to grow some balls man. Or at least have someone smuggle a porno for him. (Kaitlin's rolling around my carpet man. D;) I wish I had a creepy Biology teacher that couldn't say "penis" or "testis" or "sperm" correctly. ;_;
Solo Loco Ellingson-Rose chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Oh my god. I almost cried I was laughing so hard. That was GREAT! Great job!
Soichiro chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
LOL awesome challange!
Bar-Ohki chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
Oh dear... XP Really funny.
Nithela chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
My biology teacher went head on without hesitating, and he had all of us blushing within the next hour! xD I've never experienced a teacher that's that... WILLING to talk about creation. He was like... more.. excited and fascinated, and he wouldn't stop expressing his admiration for the wonders of the female body (seeing that he is about 60 years old makes it all a bit creepy, but he was awesome).

Oh, I was supposed to rewiev your story, heh? It was hilarious! :D I loved it, absolutely loved it! I could actually SEE it happening, and Al's innocence is adorable! Your language is great! *runs off and suddenly gets the urge to read more of your stories* ZOM!
Faye-Naruse chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
Geez...I always enjoy your writing! You have such a talent for humor and I've never regretted putting you on my favorite authors list, Le Salle De Bain! _

Now it's time for the usual list of favorite quotes (I'm guessing you probably get this all the time...)

""Ed told me that Envy removes clothes from him all the time!"" - Wonderful. Just horribly wonderful :)

"Testis" - XD What a hilarious word! For some reason it reminds me of my sister... (I hope my teacher doesn't say that when I start Sex Ed. next week 0.o...That would be rather disturbing...)

Anyway, thank you so much for posting this! Keep up the great work! _


BTW, I love the title . It's perfect!
k o u s e n chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
Oh My GOD.



this is INSANE!

I LOVE it!

Ed & Roy plus sex-talk with Al equals GENIUS.

this has got to be, like, on of my favorite

fics of yours xD

for sure.

I never could've guessed you, or anyone else,

would have used 'creation' in this way xD

I'm SO glad you did.

[ FAVE. ]

[ shelby; ]
shimigami chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
That is a funny fanfic i must say. I couldnt stop laughing. Poor Al :( Great ending. all in all it was great :P