Reviews for Royal Sun
FabLouis101 chapter 4 . 8/31
Too cute xxx
84gemstone chapter 3 . 4/24
If I'm looking for a story I'll put its name then fanfic and that works for me.
84gemstone chapter 2 . 4/24
I don't get why she was out for 4 days. If it was her dress cutting off her breathing wouldn't she be dead? im guessing the Cullen's are vamps but what happens when they don't age or have children? Looking forward to finding out
WiseOldSoul chapter 8 . 2/10
it seems rather silly for a princess to worry about
the cost of a ring.
no matter the cost, royalty comes with loads of expensive jewels,
and for her to be worrying about the cost of a run is just
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Its an interesting start...lets see what happens next...
Motherof8 chapter 19 . 6/30/2013
Loved your story . But it was too short. Thanks for writing it
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 6/30/2013
This is such a great story but too short chapters. Grrrr
Motherof8 chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
Love your story. Hope other chapters are longer. This is great
Guest chapter 16 . 3/16/2013
change her now
reobessed chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
great chapter
reobessed chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
another good chapter
reobessed chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
that was a really good start u described it really well and the grammar was good and i love ur style of writting and the plot
yamini chapter 5 . 6/21/2012
I love this story,its amazing,i hope there are more storieswith twists and turns like this.
AnuluvesTwilightSeries chapter 19 . 12/16/2011
Wowww loved the story bt ufff y did she had to be changed and that also by da bad guy ufff hate him for changing her bt atleast edwella will be together forever now wooohoo anyways very good story
Rasnadi chapter 4 . 11/30/2011
The "tingling in her toes" and then that she had no warning at all? What was the tingling if not a warning, a little itch?

And I was just wondering, if these royalty are vampires, why not have just have them keep Bella away from the horse drawn carriages, instead of damning her to being dead or a vampire. They ARE super fast and they do already know when it's going to happen so why not use either the vampire speed to pull her away or just make sure she isn't there when the carriage goes by?

Just some thoughts.
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