Reviews for Butterfly
Guest chapter 17 . 5/4
Dumbledore fucks in everything in fanfics
phhsdj chapter 28 . 3/4
I like the story up until the end your rushed it. Your AN makes it sound like you just got tired of the story so you ended. I am sorry to be negative but there is nothing more disappointing then a great story being ruined by a rushed ending.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/22
Someone really needs to cave Rons ugly face in, seriously.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/22
People Ron are despised among most males, we dont talk about breasts like this pathetic little shit.
Mysts of Time chapter 6 . 1/5
Welp. Ah...pardon my french, but your Parvati is a)still an airhead, and b) quite the b-witch. Great writing, but pass, sorry.
mckertis chapter 28 . 11/11/2016
This reads like a teenage girl's diary. utterly forgettable.
Lilly Potter ml chapter 28 . 10/13/2016
Thank you so much. It is a great story. I am glad that you didnt kill sirius.
CaptainRumbro chapter 12 . 9/12/2016
MichaelJ-D chapter 21 . 7/14/2016
I always can't believe they didn't realize that Snape as to keep up appearances, especially in front of Umbridge.
Lou chapter 11 . 7/10/2016
So nice! I ship HarPar PotPat!
harryislife chapter 28 . 6/18/2016
This is really good, with some really funny bits. Loved how you showed everyone in Harrys year working together. I like rarer pairings, and this is one I have searched for quite a bit. My only criticism (and it's not a very big one, more of a question) is how Rose Weasley is eight years old eight years after the final battle. Ron and Hermione wouldn't even have been together. Not a big deal, just something that might need a bit of clarification.
myafroatemydog chapter 27 . 5/18/2016
This was a good chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 26 . 5/18/2016
This was such a good chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 25 . 5/18/2016
This was an excellent chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 24 . 5/18/2016
This chapter was ok
766 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »