Reviews for Butterfly |
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![]() ![]() IDIOT! ITS NUMBER 4 PRIVET DRIVE other than that, great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dark chocolate eyes...mocha eyes...cinnamon skin...admit it. You were hungry when you wrote this weren't you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I love how you have Harry save Parvati, and he even repaired her bangle for her! I mean, it's not like she's witch and can do it herself. Wondering also what your explaination for Harry making a move on her is. Not like it's blatantly out of character or anything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why no sequil. Oh and i give this fic three howls. But please tell me your gonna do another, you cant just leave a huge cliff like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww, Harry proposed! :D Woot. :) |
![]() ![]() you have a solid style of writing that does note come commonly to people, i rather enjoy this story, for future reference: ma'am and though you don't use it often, try not to use said, as my teacher all ways reminds me, ''said is dead'' |
![]() ![]() I literally laughed aloud at this i Loved it! so i'm reading the series to my kid sister and i'm noticing all these harry and parvarti instances and so i go and try to find a good story with them and yours amazing "hermiones blanket is on fire" hahaha well thanks for the laughD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once in a while a nice little romance just hits the spot. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh whats gonna happen! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww fluffiness is so great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() D great story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok start |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad, definitely interesting but you tend to compress months into days quite regularly which causes very little to make sense. Valentines to June seemed about a week if that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story..well done. :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work. |