Reviews for Butterfly |
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![]() ![]() People Ron are despised among most males, we dont talk about breasts like this pathetic little shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp. Ah...pardon my french, but your Parvati is a)still an airhead, and b) quite the b-witch. Great writing, but pass, sorry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This reads like a teenage girl's diary. utterly forgettable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much. It is a great story. I am glad that you didnt kill sirius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dropped |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always can't believe they didn't realize that Snape as to keep up appearances, especially in front of Umbridge. |
![]() ![]() So nice! I ship HarPar PotPat! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, with some really funny bits. Loved how you showed everyone in Harrys year working together. I like rarer pairings, and this is one I have searched for quite a bit. My only criticism (and it's not a very big one, more of a question) is how Rose Weasley is eight years old eight years after the final battle. Ron and Hermione wouldn't even have been together. Not a big deal, just something that might need a bit of clarification. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an excellent chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was ok |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a pretty good chapter. This getting good |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a pretty confusing chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did he break up with he |