Reviews for Butterfly |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, hope you continue it |
![]() ![]() hope you continue this story. it would be really good i think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! and its so well written,you have to continue with it. Theres hardly any Harry and Parvati stories and they would make such an interesting couple especially seeing as at the start of your story Harry obvioulsy was jealous about Cedric and Cho, so it would be really good to see how things turn i really really hope you continue with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great one shot! I suppose if you made it longer it wouldn't be a bad thing, imagine Ginny's expression! Either way it's a good story! |
![]() ![]() Eh. it was good. well written too. im just not that bigga fan of harry/'pavarti' eh. MCM |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story, I wish there was more Parvati/ Harry stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd like to see a full-length story... Harry/Parvati is an unusual pairing and you're writing it very well so far. So, yes, continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it would be an interesting start to a full length story. i don't think i have seen one carried to full length that had this start. it's all been one shots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, update more! |
![]() ![]() I like this - I say go forward with it. This isn't a common pairing, or a common perspective. Most of the Harry/Parvati I've seen seems to take place following OOTP with some sort of gushy apology scene. I like the idea of a slightly more confident Parvati who is willing to try to help things move along, rather than just get huffy and run off. Harry definitely isn't the sharpest tool in the shed when it comes to girls, and Parvati would doubtless realize that, and should have been at least remotely prepared for it, as was the case here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ARGH! BUTTERFLY! |
![]() ![]() looks good, i think it would be interesting as full story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter man please update soon |