Reviews for Butterfly
QuestSkier68 chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Great story, hope you continue it
misfit chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
hope you continue this story. it would be really good i think.
princess-of-all things-sweet chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
This is really good! and its so well written,you have to continue with it. Theres hardly any Harry and Parvati stories and they would make such an interesting couple especially seeing as at the start of your story Harry obvioulsy was jealous about Cedric and Cho, so it would be really good to see how things turn i really really hope you continue with this.
ProperT chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
This was a great one shot! I suppose if you made it longer it wouldn't be a bad thing, imagine Ginny's expression! Either way it's a good story!
Mrs Clare Malfoy chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Eh. it was good. well written too. im just not that bigga fan of harry/'pavarti'

eh.

MCM
Grey Jackett chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
nice story, I wish there was more Parvati/ Harry stories.
Gwinna chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I'd like to see a full-length story... Harry/Parvati is an unusual pairing and you're writing it very well so far. So, yes, continue!
texasranger10 chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
it would be an interesting start to a full length story. i don't think i have seen one carried to full length that had this start. it's all been one shots.
xoverfan4ever chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Yes, update more!
moniteur chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I like this - I say go forward with it. This isn't a common pairing, or a common perspective. Most of the Harry/Parvati I've seen seems to take place following OOTP with some sort of gushy apology scene. I like the idea of a slightly more confident Parvati who is willing to try to help things move along, rather than just get huffy and run off. Harry definitely isn't the sharpest tool in the shed when it comes to girls, and Parvati would doubtless realize that, and should have been at least remotely prepared for it, as was the case here.
Original Katie Bell chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
ARGH! BUTTERFLY!
werewolf chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
looks good, i think it would be interesting as full story
The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
Great chapter man please update soon
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