I was randomly searching for decently long HP fanfiction with Pavarti and stumbled upon this wonderful gem of a story. Reading it was a great pleasure, and I really enjoyed how Harry and Pavarti's relationship developed. A fantastic story overall.

Can you please write a sequel? Please? C'mon as someone who actually suffers from depression, this story made my day. I'd love to see a sequel. If you don't plan on writing one can I write one?

Well, a close brush with the "M" rating. Looking good.

There is a paragraph at the end with all the chapter titles.

Harry is still going on a date with her after she made his best friend cry? Hes not going to at leest talk to her about it? Thats not a very good friend...

yeah

667.

So wait though. You throw in that tease about the prophecy in the epilogue and the hogwarts burning scene and then say you're not writing a sequel?

Then what was the point of the whole thing?

Lovely story. Although the final battle was skipped over a bit.

You are a great writer and I really enjoyed your story :D

The idea is interesting, but your use of a spell ("Langlock") that Harry would not have known in fourth year does produce a little bit of dissonance in the reading.

I like how the story deals with depression and mental health in general. Harry Potter should have had counselling even before he went to Hogwarts, though.

I liked the story...right up to halfway through this chapter, chapter 20. I'm not sure anymore when the Weasley patriarch was attacked in the original timeline, but it happened the chapter before in yours.

So in this chapter, the story goes from discussing the Defense Association / Dumledore's Army...and then it's all about the exams and Harry having this fake vision and wanting to rescue Sirius. It took away quite some joy I was having with this story.

good story so far, but why exactly did you decide to write pathetic!Harry? Your Harry is a little stupid and cannot even kill criminals who are killing his friends and trying to kill him.

What I'm curious about, is Remus' family.

I enjoyed.

Great story so far, the only problem I have is the over usage of the term 'green-eyed teenager'. I feel as though it's a bit overdone. Other than that, it's a great story, :]