|Reviews for Asleep|
| marwamarwa chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
I am absolutely in love with (and in awe of) the way you've written this.
Kyouya's point of view is perfect. I love how you've described every single detail Kyouya's noticed. It was just, oh it was just wonderful. Very poetic sounding, I think. And the length of time as it passes. It's all very adorable.
As is Tamaki's reaction when he wakes up. -
| Haru Inuzuka chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Hehe, kawaii! That was good! Plz keep up the good work, k? Ja! -
| Phiso chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
I like this one. It's interesting. It's true, most people don't really look at a person - every detail, every line and shadow. Most don't have the patience or the opportunity, and it really is an amazing thing to have the chance to do so.
I love how Tamaki totally reacted in the opposite manner. XD That was adorable, and very him. Kyouya, so thoughtful...it reflects their personalities well, and how they go about approaching their relationship. Hee.
Though I do hope Tamaki didn't decide to wake Kyouya up. I'm sure he's smarter than that, right?
| Kalira of the flames chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Very cute story showing the different thought processes the boys have on the same stimuli. Kyoya's actions were sweet.
| strawberry-fish-cake chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
| KuriCurry chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
The last part... really made me laugh !
It's such a sweet and well made fiction! They're both just so cute there ! And how you described how Kyoyakun stared at Tamaki...! I LOVED it...!
I hope the best for you, because you have a gift ! A skill if you will, that should not be wasted ! This is just so SWEET and warm! (the least I'd expect from Kyoya! no offense)
_ What more can I say ! I just love this fiction!
Very well written, well done on the emotions, the characters !
| Emina Fujiko chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Aw! I loved how Kyoya spent all that describing Tamaki, and when Tamaki wakes up, he gets straight to the point! Cute! Kawaii!
| ShootToThrill chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
I swear I have no words to describe this but CUTE!
Ahem, loved it. Fav. Write more of these! I like this one so much!
| blufox chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
THeyre both so cute. :)
| The O.C. Addict chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
Aw. I loved this. Beautiful. :)
| AncientSilverYouko chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
LOL how cute :D
| Adi88 chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
[I’m doing this by verse, saving The Big L for last, just for the record. Which may mean it comes tomorrow if I am to get any shut-eye. Still haven’t finished The Art Monster. But, yes, I shall at least know that OHSHC and probably House have received my adulation.]
“Maybe he should have asked for a cushion of some kind; the table could leave marks on his skin if he slipped down.”
- Because Kyouya cares! So cute…
“…the ambient live music, lighting, and scent manipulation ‘required’ for any romantic setting.”
- Oh yes. Someone has to veto. I don’t even want to know how you would manipulate light and scent outside… Rich bastards.
“…the ever-sore subject of Kyouya’s perpetually-scarce group of approved clientele.”
- Hat. Hat. Hat. I love this. And thank you… I don’t remember if it’s canon and you’re acknowledging, or this is your own inferential guess, but either way I love it. Nice to see an actual, practical problem rather than the overblown inversion of “I have too MANY clients.” Which is a legitimate problem in and of itself, but people tend to steer clear and all. Romantic heroes can’t generally take many knocks. Kyouya, though, is made of stronger stuff!
Wow… I can’t paste that whole thing, but wow. It’s so… worshipful. I am utter goo.
Damn… and it continues.. There’s just too much to paste, and it makes me irritable because this is my favorite one so far and yet my review’ll be the shortest yet. But… god, the language is so beautiful. And Kyouya’s “textile conjuring” and knowing a person no one else does. That stuff about almost sleep, but being behind the wheel, and glacial slowness, or just steering the dreams… This is so out of order. You can see why I paste. But MAN.
“Kyouya blinked, and became aware of a change. He looked at his watch, and found that three hours had passed.”
- I do adore that. Hee. Now, would you know anything of what that’s like…?
“He solved his problem by extracting one arm from Tamaki’s posture and touching their hands together across the table.”
- Aow. So…
And then we skip people… and this is the best part of the entire thing. They’re both so perfect, but juxtaposed against each other they’re magnificent. That slow, lizard-like crawl, turning Tamaki over like a gem in its horde… and then this spinning, dancing kinda cute little thing playing with Kyouya like a bouncy ball, taking seconds to register what Kyouya took hours on.
“Kyouya looked so cute when he was asleep!”
- Yeah. That about sums it up.
| Rochelle the Echidna chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I always love how people describe Tamaki when he's caught off-guard. He's so damn pretty... but, anyway, you did a very nice job on this. You have such a way with words!