Reviews for Togetherness
xThomas2 chapter 5 . 12/18/2014
The story is mildly strange, lacks real action. Most of it is.. Yech ... Learning. Reflection. Not really my cup of tea.

But at least your writing isn't dry.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 6 . 10/30/2014
Very cool:)
Ikurus chapter 6 . 3/30/2014
Ooh, I like this one. Hope the sequel's similar.
Thank you for writing and sharing this.
skillet of stories 1999 chapter 6 . 7/22/2013
Very good, by the way, is there a sequel?
sergeikovon chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Nice one Zephry.
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight chapter 6 . 5/14/2012
Great story another great entry in this catagory from you.
tuatara chapter 6 . 12/15/2011
This is such an enjoyable story, one of the few truly great boy-type Akane tales. It's certainly the most original...by a wide margin. Not sure why I never got around to reviewing this one before, but I had to rectify that. This story pleases me enormously. I think I'm going to re-read the sequel now. Wonderful stuff!
Shannon Dee chapter 6 . 8/12/2011
Beautiful AU story. Thank you.
chronodekar chapter 6 . 10/14/2010
MZephyr,

This is a VERY different take on the curses. I've read hundreds of Ranma stories and here comes one which is a bit different than the rest! Ranma & Akane have cursed forms of each other!

Your a romantic, aren't you? It shows in your writing - you showcase the interactions and relationships between the different people and have the world in a more serious mode.

Not to criticize, but at times, I miss the humor of the manga. Try reading "Girl Days" by Kenko (dead fic now) or "The Key to a Successful Interview" by The Sage of Toads. The latter updates and is absolutely HILARIOUS.

Again, its a sweet relationship you showcase here and I enjoy it. I really do. (_)

-chronodekar
I am whatever you say I am chapter 6 . 5/12/2010
Well, similar to the series proper, all the dramatic irony is frustrating as can be. The obviousness of the situations completely lost on the characters in the story. One keeps hoping they'll finally figure it all out, and then, you get rewarded by reading further troubles the characters get into. I can't sya this is really a complaint, nor praise. Perhaps praise in the fact you could hold the spirit of the series, with the constant string of problems, the occasional downfall, with the occasional monumental success. Seeing Akane back up and about, after all the introspection inside ranma's head, ironically enough, was grand, along with the fact Kuno is gone, kinda, Nabiki's not a bitc#, kinda, etc.
Paosheep chapter 6 . 3/13/2010
I really enjoyed this story very much. It's a great idea, and you really did it justice without breaking character (and it would've been _so_ easy to break character). And I like where you stopped it; it makes sense, and it feels good.
mwyeoh chapter 6 . 3/4/2010
Very nice and well told story

I believe that if this situation had happened, Ranma and Akane wouldve acted exactly as portrayed in the story
Shadowalker666 chapter 6 . 9/21/2009
Well you did it again, still yet another excellent story where you alter things to a large extent and yet it is still enjoyable to someone like me, who needs Ranma and Akane's relationship to be true in spirit to the original intentions of their story.
Prodigy99 chapter 6 . 7/13/2009
This story was and still is beautiful! Please continue to write Ranma stories, for you are one of the greatest authors ever! And to think this all started from a simple slip on a patch of grass! That's brilliant! And the kiss? Perfect! Although I still miss the conversations that Ranma and Akane shared through their minds. Truthfully a story to remember! Now, I shall read the sequel!
Sakura Lisel chapter 2 . 6/29/2009
Oh dear, this isn't going to end well for Akane if her body's still alive and she manages to get back into it. *lol* Whenever the Amazon's catch up with Ranma, they're going to think that Akane is Ranma and attack with intention of killing her, unless Ranma's around to prove that it was HIM looking like Akane who beat Shampoo. *lol* But then again there's the whole obstacles are for killing thing, and I can almost picture Shampoo deciding to kill Akane to get her out of the way in her pursuit of Ranma, and bring Akane's body back home as proof that she did kill the outsider girl who beat her, even if it is the wrong 'girl'. *lol*
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