|Reviews for High School Musical the tv show: The New Evans|
| RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 2 . 1/24/2013
i hope she will stand up for what she wants. i love the story so far even though theres not that much. D
| Stepheyy chapter 2 . 4/3/2008
of Curse Ryan has to go stright to Sharpay but it is funny
| coutureflower chapter 2 . 8/22/2007
Firstly, I guess I won't be too hard since you have nice spelling, and your grammar isn't too horrible.
But wow. The script format is never a really nice way to go, you don't give any descriptive skills at ALL. Sadly, it's like a little children's book.
"Bill is a boy. Bill plays with his baseball. Bill throws his baseball. Bill runs after his baseball. Bill is happy."
Plus, things are moving WAY too fast. How on earth could she have a picture of him if he never gave it to her? (or maybe he did, and I just missed it.) And she just now learns his name and then suddenly they declare their love for each other and kiss.
Plus, sad to say, but Elayna kinda reminds me of a Mary-Sue. :x
At least she isn't stealing Troy from Gabriella or somethin' like that.
| dreamer 3097 chapter 2 . 3/1/2007
this is so sweet hope you update soon
| dreamer 3097 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
this is a good start