Reviews for AU: StarCrossed
Motherof8 chapter 10 . 9/22/2014
Finally, a
Motherof8 chapter 5 . 9/22/2014
What? Bella wants to shop?lol
LAB1 chapter 29 . 8/8/2014
This is a really adorable story. I enjoyed reading it!
confused chapter 6 . 2/15/2010
me likey i guess

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lol just playing its really really amazing
blueeyeddarling chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
i really like this story! its great so far

and i really like how when you switch pov's you dont repeat the same thing over and over until you know what everyone was thinking. its ok for some stories or some moments, but really it gets annoying after a while! i like the way you write so much more!
rmw8855 chapter 29 . 7/18/2009
I really enjoyed this :) Now off to find the sequel
Kaylz chapter 29 . 7/1/2009
I loved this story, original. A few typing errors and the confusion with the year of bellas transformation, but i still loved every second of it.
Kaylz chapter 26 . 7/1/2009
Okay, as much as i love this, your making me confused about 4 times now, youv skipped from saying bella was changed in the 60's to bella was changed in 2006. Just thought id put it out there. Oh and i love there teasing with each other.
Kaylz chapter 17 . 7/1/2009
This is so romantic i want to scream. But its passed midnight and i dont think my family would be too pleased with me. lol

Oh and candles on a yaht and swimming with the greek god himself. Not a cliche.
xXM'n'MXx chapter 29 . 3/22/2008
It was really good.

A little confusing at parts, but if you read it over again it amkes perfect sence.

AWESOME! I'm looking forward to reading the sequal. D
La-Mer-De-Lune chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
oh that reminds me of me and my sister. the burrowing a shirt thing i mean. :D
BessieMarie chapter 22 . 3/16/2008
I keep getting really confused. Its like in the story you talk about Edawrd as if hes a CUllen but i thought he was a "davis" and then its like u call Carlisle his father but i thought Peter was his father. This i noticed only in this Chapther (19) and the one where they are on the log in the beginning. I thought u shoudl know cause i keep getting lost in confuesed.

Other than that...OMG this story is amazing...im like addicted to FanFics and this is one of the top ones ive read...

BessieMarie
StuckInReality89 chapter 12 . 2/17/2008
Why would anyone who was puking all day demand to go to school? Why would anyone demand to go to school at all? You seem to be a bit like Bella...unique.
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
love this story so far
ordinary vamp chapter 27 . 2/11/2008
That's soo cute! Aw, was the house mentioned in the last chapter JUST Bella and Edwards?
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