Reviews for Son of the Last Unicorn
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
please continue
Elsie chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Huge issue. There have been male unicorns before. It's mentioned both in the movie and the book.
Not Necessarily chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
You're not a bad writer. But seriously. Seriously, now. Okay.

That is all.
Angelus Erreare chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
This was...poignant. It's tragically beautiful.

But it's hopeful. You've given the story another chance to be revived, so to speak. However, this is where you should be careful. Be careful on how you would develop Derek as a character. It's only too easy to create an OC that ends up as a Gary Stu. So, be careful.

But with that warning being said, I sincerely wish for you to continue and let your story unfold.

Well, now for more CC.

Please break up your paragraphs. It's too congested and it's difficult to read. Also, there are a few spelling errors but that's okay; it's nothing spell-check can't cure!

And...yea! I do wish you'd continue.
mrs.Franny.Robinson chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Tragic, Beautiful, Hopefull...what else can I say? I loved it! xxxxxxx
Vmale chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Please go on! It is so Wonderful! What going to happen next.
Two Ghosts in One Mirror chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
The last unicorn gave birth to a shape-shifting creature with 'metalic' blue eyes (four-legged Baby Gary Stu in the making, by the way), and she named that creature... Derek?

And in the next installment, the red bull (somehow) gives birth to a flying purple calf whom he names... PHIL!

Yours,

Ghost

(Eins)
Sky-Lily chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
This was really interesting, but beautiful and sad. 3
Water Flower 2009 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
...I like the way you think. A
alice chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
plz do more chapters plz
Sarah Goodwill chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
AW! Cute
Akira Ishtar chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I love the beginning of this story! It is a nice start to what I believe will be a great story. Lucilla Darkate does NOT have a clue what she's talking about and don't let her get to you. She's just a hateful, ignorant person who needs to shut up and let you be creative with YOUR story. I personally think that this will be a great piece of fanfiction. Keyword on Fiction as that is what it is. You are allowed to do to your story as YOU please and as long as you like it, who cares who else likes it. She's not the one writing it, so she can shut up. Don't let that hateful person stop you from continuing this story, as it is a good one and one I hope to see more of in the future.

Thank you for your time,

Akira Ishtar
SnuggleBunnyBaby chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I like the story idea, but it has bine over a year since you added to your story, you should add more.
x.Janele.x chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Very interesting beginning! The movie was one of my favorites when I was younger, and I just watched it about a month or so ago randomly. So, yeah, I definitely think you should continue this. Make the first chapter longer, and add in more spaces for paragraphs to make it easier to read. Other than that, it's great! Please update!