Reviews for Forgiveness
Running-Wild22 chapter 12 . 6/10/2010
I hate that this doesn't have an ending! What gonna happen?
Running-Wild22 chapter 5 . 6/10/2010
That right, Carly is dangerous!
tanya2byour21 chapter 12 . 4/4/2008
I read this story on Hotzone and could not reply on it there. This was a great story and I loved it you are a very talented writer and I hope you write more Jarly stories. I love them and there are not alot of them out there and most of them on Hotzone are not fishied. Again I am so glad you posted this here. Keep up the great writing.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 12 . 2/22/2007
Jason's speech was amazing. How I would love for him to say even one of those lines on GH. I would be doing the happy dance.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 11 . 2/22/2007
I love how you added that Jason was proud of her. Aw!
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 10 . 2/22/2007
Sonny made sense with this line

There’s something between those two that is powerful. Something that doesn’t happen between two people all that often

I do like that he is not pretending to love Carly in this story.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 9 . 2/22/2007
Loved Michael calling him Dadda. Aww, I miss that kind of stuff on Gh these days.
JC Morgan chapter 12 . 2/21/2007
Awe Jason finally found the words! Ya for him...and for Carly because she finally got to hear everything she needed to from the only man she's ever loved!

I loved your story and I hope you are going to continue it someday!

JC
JC Morgan chapter 11 . 2/21/2007
Now why can't all custody aggreements be that easy...lol

Well we know when AJ shows up...it's NOT going to be so easy!

Ya for Carly pursuing what she loves...other then Michael and Jason of course...lol

Great Job!

JC
JC Morgan chapter 10 . 2/21/2007
Ok Liz has gone just a little bit psycho when it comes to Jason...

Well it's nice to see Sonny has accepted the fact that Jason goes after Carly just as much if not more then she goes after him...he may not like it but he sees it and accepts it now...

Great Job!

JC
JC Morgan chapter 9 . 2/21/2007
Maybe it's a good thing Jason heard all of that...maybe he'll start to see that he needs to speak up more often or he can't be angry for things other people don't just know because he thinks they should...

I love how close Carly and Bobbie are!

Awe Michael knew his Dadda )

Great Job!

JC
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 8 . 2/21/2007
aww, once again i could cry at all the emotions between Jason and Carly. it seems they both think they are not good enough to get everything they want in the world. how sad. But hopefully somehow they will get the courage to go for it anyway.

I love that Carly is being independent in this story.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 7 . 2/21/2007
I love Bobbie and Carly scenes. It is wonderful that Carly is leaning on her and that they are in this together, as it should be.
JC Morgan chapter 8 . 2/20/2007
Ya for Carly growing up and doing what's best for Michael and standing on her own two feet! She isn't trying to take him away from anyone she wants him to have everyone...if AJ could just see that then they would all be ok!

Can't wait to see what happens...where Carly gets a Job...maybe with Luke at the club...

Great Job!

JC
JC Morgan chapter 7 . 2/20/2007
I'm really glad Carly has Bobbie there supporting her no matter what! It's what Carly needs right now. It saddens me her expectations of Jason..calling to yell at her about a scheme or a plan and about it involving Michael...but I could see him doing this...

Great Job!

JC
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