Reviews for Heart of a Dragon
Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2014
Is it ok that I imagine lori the predicon from transformers prime?
LordStarscream22 chapter 3 . 11/22/2013
write Override's spirit thingy. it's about Override getting captured by Starscream and having Starscream take Override to an underground cybertronian cavern and having Starscream chain Override to a giant stone and having Starscream activate a mechanical arm and having the arm put a white light on Override's face and having the arm enter Override's cybertronian body and pull Override's cybertronian soul out of her body and having Override's lifeless head go down and having the arm take Override's cybertronian protoplasm to a protoplasm vat and mess up Override's hair and drop Override's cybertronian protoplasm in the protoplasm vat and having Scourge jump towards Override's lifeless body and having Scourge put Overrides's lifeless head up and putting his finger on Override's head and his thumb on her chin and having Scourge smile and laugh at Override as he opens Override's mouth and puts his finger her chin and having Override's orange cybertronian soul come out of her mouth and turning Scourge orange and having Scourge growl at Override as he enters Override's body to turn Override into a female Autobot zombie slave and having Override's hands turn orange and having Override's optics turn red and turning into Scourge Override and having Sideways and Soundwave free Scourge Override and having Override's cybertronian protoplasm re-enter her body and having Scourge jump out of her body and having Scourge breathe fire in Override's face and having Scourge re-enter Override to turn her back into Scourge Override
LordStarscream22 chapter 3 . 11/21/2013
write Override's spirit thingy. it's about Override getting captured by Starscream and having Starscream take Override to an underground cybertronian cavern and having Starscream chain Override to a giant stone and having Starscream activate a mechanical arm and having the arm put a white light on Override's face and having the arm enter Override's cybertronian body and pull Override's cybertronian soul out of her body and having Override's lifeless head go down and having the arm take Override's cybertronian protoplasm to a protoplasm vat and mess up Override's hair and drop Override's cybertronian protoplasm in the protoplasm vat and having Scourge jump towards Override's lifeless body and having Scourge put Overrides's lifeless head up and putting his finger on Override's head and his thumb on her chin and having Scourge smile and laugh at Override as he opens Override's mouth and puts his finger her chin and having Override's orange cybertronian soul come out of her mouth and turning Scourge orange and having Scourge growl at Override as he enters Override's body to turn Override into a female Autobot zombie slave and having Override's hands turn orange and having Override's optics turn red and turning into Scourge Override and having Sideways and Soundwave free Scourge Override
LordStarscream22 chapter 3 . 11/21/2013
write Darla's spirit thingy. it's about Darla, Lori's mom, getting captured by Sideways and having Sideways take Darla to an underground cavern and having Sideways chain Darla to a giant stone and having Sideways activate a mechanical arm and having the arm put an orange light on Darla's face and having the arm enter Darla's body and pull Darla's soul out of her body and having Darla's lifeless head go down and having the arm take Darla's protoplasm to a protoplasm vat and mess up Darla's hair and drop Darla's protoplasm in the protoplasm vat and having Scourge jump towards Darla's lifeless body and having Scourge put Darla's lifeless head up and putting his finger on Darla's hair and his thumb on her chin and having Scourge smile and laugh at Darla as he opens Darla's mouth and puts his finger her chin and having Darla's orange soul come out of her mouth and turning Scourge orange and having Scourge growl at Darla as he enters Darla's body to turn Darla into a human zombie slave and having Darla's hands turn orange and having Darla's eyes turn orange and turning into Scourge Darla and having Sideways free Scourge Darla
StormRaven333 chapter 20 . 4/24/2013
I THOROUGHLY enjoyed this story! I was grinning, laughing, had my jaw fall into my lap sometimes...because I absolutely LOVED Lori's personality.
... chap 15 was pure gold on that! XD.
EPIC!
grimlock.trex99 chapter 20 . 10/14/2012
So you're saying that in this universe Michal Bay didn't direct the transformers movie, it was Bud Hanson. Will there be a sequel to this?
grimlock.trex99 chapter 14 . 10/14/2012
What about override, what does she think of this?
ralexis cor chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
great
Brenden chapter 20 . 1/27/2012
great work
Prowls-little-hetalian chapter 20 . 7/7/2011
I have never seen/read this Jungle Planet Key Pmega Lock, thing before but i still followed it realy well. If you can make a noob understand this, then you have talent. smiles :)
Sailor Pandabear chapter 20 . 1/23/2011
cool
Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
This is a really good first chapter. It's intriguing.
Dinobots4Ever chapter 20 . 7/15/2010
Oh wow, that was the sweetest story I have ever read! It was so good that I was so egger to click the next button to read the next chapter! Well done!
Dinobots4Ever chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
I love it! I cant wait to read more!
Dragoon Galaxy chapter 5 . 6/16/2010
yuck, getting kissed by megatron
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