Wow, powerful stuff. Bravo!

Chilling and wonderful. And you're absoultely right. This is how Xavier would go bad, when his great love for humanity overode compassion for his fellow mutants.

Whoah. I don't know what to say beyond- it's brilliant, could totally happen, and I'm chilled.

I'd read this story some years ago, and it's still just as chilling now as then.

A thousand apologies!

I went TOTALLY overboard! Traumatized by Kurt's death. I don't really hate Xavier, never have, think he's an interesting and complex guy.

This was spectacularly written, Marvel should by it off you for a squillion of any currency you like XP and make an official AU X-Men comic with it- word for word. That's how good it is, and I'm a mega-critical Express English Student!

It was haunting, tense and utterly horrifying; I read the third-person bit at least eight times before I finally processed it all, and by then it was too late! Sorry for bastard-izing your reviews page. *punishes self- painfully* My ranting is not worthy of such skill. *sob*

I love Kurt being a priest as well. I don't understand why Chuck Austen hated that idea so much, and, heck, Kurt had already left the church when Holy War was written and didn't need such a bad plot!

I like Azazel being his dad though. Defying his blood to be as pure as he is... Awesome job, you've set me off! I commend you.

0_o

Charles confessed to Kurt, then killed him.

You BASTARD!

This was creepy, the Prof's gone wrong in his mind tank! I'm assuming in this, that mutants are accepted?

Charles, I will never forgive you for giving Elf a stroke.

You are a bastard, now and forever. I'll never look at you in the same way again. Although, it did seem he was just making his own personal army all this time...

Awesome fic though, keep it up.

Creepy-Crazy-Charles Bastard

Brilliant story! Very well written!

I adore how this story slowly creeps up on the reader. As I realized who the speaker was, what he's doing, to whom he's speaking, and what he's about to do-it gave me chills. It's AU, yet it works, because Xaver is only maybe one step away from his canon self. The attention to detail-like the way Magneto's death means that he's not there to save the Scarlet Witch which dominoes into Pietro's life being forever changed-is so better than your average Marvel editor... um, I mean, is outstanding. The implications of the epilogue, particularly the switch to a third-party narrator, are horrifying.

Very interesting story-the first-person POV is well done, and you write Xavier as a villain very convincingly. I like the idea of Nightcrawler as a priest too.

Creepy.I liked it.

wow that was creepy. great, but creepy.

hnh

Ah Man! Intense, intense intense.

I knew Xavier was evil, I just knew it. DIE XAVIER DIE!

Hm, great story. I've often considered what Xavier said. The more I think about it, the more I realize people aren't meant to have superpowers, that's when I thank God that there are real mutants especially not telepaths, and also why I thank Him that he didn't give me too much power, b/c I could not handle it.

Mind you, this is sad that I've actually thought about this stuff, you know. I am such a dork.-lol

Whatever a mutant's potential, however, murdering them is wrong. Wrong, wrong, wrong, humans are humans and therefore in the image of God. Murder is wrong, wrong wrong. I knew I never liked Xavier.

Anyway, I've ranted and raved. Keep writing, while I go try to save my semblence(sp?) of a life. It's sad that I have actually thought through all this stuff. Really, really sad. And so cool-lol. I worry about myself. *voice in my head*-"I worry about you too."

Fairly good story, but the last part where you switched to third person was a little confusing. If you had found some way to serperate it (asterisks, etc.) it might be a little easier to follow. However, I enjoy this story. You're a very talented writer.

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god.

I have no words.

Very well done! What a twist at the end! This is an excellent piece of writing.