|Reviews for What I Saw|
| shadows and silhouettes chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Wow I actually almost cried at the end. This was very well written and it made me hate Jacob a little less. Very little less though. I've always known he could be kind and such, but I just can't stand the way he hates vampires. They are awesome. Werewolves on the othre hand... Wow I sound like them now! Anyways it was really good and I look forward to more stories written by you. I'm adding this one-shot to my Favorite Stories list.
| esme cullen chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
What a beautiful, beautiful story,
wonderfully written and developed.
You are very talented. Keep writing.
I look forward to your future stories.
| dIStUrBEd AvOCadO chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Wow, great writing! o
| serving.ashton chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
wow! I love this story! You did such a great job with this, and I felt all nervous and tense while I was reading sometimes. Unfortunately, I'm a Jacob Black hater myself, and this story makes me unable to hate him as much, but until this happens in the story... I still hate him.
Still, it's really well-written, and very incharacter for the most part. I love it!
| Adieu l'apathie chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
oh my gosh...
your story is... undescribable (you know in a good way).
I absolutely adored it!
It made me tear up at the end as well...
You did an outstanding job on Jacob's character.
As far as stories go this is one of the best one-shots.
| laramara89 chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
All I can say is W-O-W! Personally I've never been the biggest of Jacob fans either, but that story was just amazing! Beautifully written!
| Bright Green Eyes chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
I really am not a fan of Jacob's but that was amazing! It was so good, it actually made me kind of like him more than before. Amazing work.
| shobbs chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Oh my god that was so good. Perfect actually.
| midnightmoons chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
aw! that's so happy yet so sad! love it! you made me cry! no one's done that!
| not done baking chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
Yay for incredibaly long fics, there aren't enough of them! This was really good, I can only imagine how long this took to write but one from Edward's point of view would be interesting, since he could hear Jake's thoughts. I had totally forgotten about that until you mentioned it. :)
| Hidden but Seen chapter 1 . 2/19/2007