Reviews for Breakdown
AlaskanFan chapter 4 . 2/1
Good job! Great tension - pacing - characterizations - relationships. Thanks!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/25/2015
Great story!
cindythechef chapter 4 . 11/13/2014
love this so much :)
VG LittleBear chapter 4 . 2/16/2014
Hi, interesting action, sweeping tale, great interaction. McGee is growing up, Tony is serious, and Gibbs is Gibbs!
Thank you and cheers!
dolphinrain chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
Exciting story. Love how protective Tim was for Tony. Like little bro looking after big bro. Nice story.
juniper294 chapter 4 . 2/10/2013
Love the story, I love reading some good DiNozzo and McGee scenes, and this definitely covered that. Great read )
LittleMissDramaticDreams chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
Great story! Action and hurt/comfort packed, pefect! :D
danielle007 chapter 4 . 6/1/2011
Awwwwwwwwww! Great fic! Really good from beginning to end.

This was really great: in a move that looked like it had been practiced, but they weren't needed. D

I love Tony/Tim fics like this, way to go!
Supernaturalloverja chapter 3 . 12/1/2010
Still love the story and poor baby i love tony
Supernaturalloverja chapter 4 . 12/1/2010
I love your story it is amazing and you understand the charaters
Imagine The Dreamers chapter 4 . 10/17/2010
i loved it u r amazing especially the ending
Doni chapter 4 . 8/10/2010
Great story.
Net Sparrow chapter 4 . 6/5/2010
Great Tony whump. You have so well written how Tim is not allowing Tony to give up. Liked your story very much.
Livia2001 chapter 4 . 5/31/2010
Great story! Thanks for sharing )
Arianna18 chapter 4 . 2/18/2010
Bravo. This was just excellent, from the technical nature of the 'breakdown', to the descriptions throughout, and your characterizations were bang on. GREAT suspence, and very nice 'aw' moments. So glad I saw this story recc'd! Thanks!
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