Reviews for Longing
Blacat Fan chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
aww i feel for ya eve believe me i know i hope there's another chapter soon .
Kats02980416 chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
It does fit Eve's inner theater of her mind. I always deep down as she did get older and all the time spent teaming up with Train and wanting to beat him that finally she'd realize she has fallen in love with him. I'd love to see a POV match to Train's wave of thinking. What's going on in his mind seeing his "little Princess" growing up and not being so little. I mean she's bound to look like Dr. Tearju, who DNA mother, but with the skills of a professional killer/sweeper. I've always believed that if the manga were to continue on a few adventures future wise, when Eve did get older 18 or on, that shed be somebody tough and not one to reckon with. I also believe at this time Train would admit to himself and Eve that he has feelings for her. great fic.
Silverneko9lives0 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
aw...

I feel depressed!

You got it right: it was Rinslet Walker.
FacelessNameless chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I want a Train plushie!XD
Tuli-Susi chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
that was awesome! i just finished reading the manga online, and I was thinking about writing a fic where Eve secretly loves Train, but he doesn't know and sees her as a sister. But this is far, far better than anything I could have come up with! Simply amazing!
keptein chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Uwah! I want a second chapter on this! It was so nice and cute and depressive and I just really need another chapter! Pleaase?
Demeterr chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Wow this was written really nicely.
mahoakitti chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Aww!
SouJiro-LoVeR chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
aiya... so nice... i loved it... i love train/eve... please, make more fanfics like this one...!
Mayonaka no Sasayaki chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
awsome! i love it! i really like eve/train pairing! please write more!
Hikari the Keyblade of Hope chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Aw... poor Eve... Good fic~!
marufu-chan chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
that was cute.
Hagetaka chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
It was fairly well written. Good job, but I think I might have liked a longer verion (then again, this was a farily good length, not really that short)

keep on writing!
satomika chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
HEY THERE...

I LIKE YOUR'E SHORT CHAPPIE...

BUT COULD YOU PLEASE MAKE A NOVEL ABOUT TRAIN AND EVE'S ROMANCE?

THANK YOU...

AND PLEASE, IF YOU WOULD REPLY TO THIS, CONTACT ME AT

lovelots and Godspeed.

xox
professionalhatstand chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
AW! So cute. Makes me sad. I read this later because I didn't know who Eve was. Now I do so I could read it. I like it. Yet again we disagree on couples. P Her and Sven seems cuter to me. But hey that's me. But I still like Eve and Train. Loved it. Hope it's not a one shot I would like to see how it develops
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