|Reviews for Lucky Bachelorette Number Two|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/6
Here's an idea: let's throw all of part 2 of the canon manga into the trash. The awful Itachi reveal that made no sense, Tobito, Kaguya, the Kage Summit Arc, the shitty 4th Ninja War, all of it. Then we can replace it with this fanfic. Kakashi and Sakura would actually be likable, Naruto wouldn't be a complete douche who failed to change the system, Sasuke would finally get some justice for his clan, and Itachi wouldn't be some clan-murdering martyr who we were supposed to pity more than his victims. The fact that this had decent humor and didn't take itself too seriously is also a vast improvement over canon. Sigh. Even if I'm still bitter about how bad the manga got in the end, thanks for writing a fic that reminded me why I'd once liked this series.
| Obsessed Lass chapter 1 . 10/26/2016
Generally I don't read yaoi fics but this one was abso-fuckin-lutely hilarious. I definitely wanna read more SasuNaru if it's going to be of this calibre. Kudos! Looking forward to read more pieces by you.
| Kayiza chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
This story is so cute omg!
Keep up the amazing work!
| Alibi Nonsense chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
I can just imagine the sequel now. Itachi dies, haemorrhaging on his own nose-blood, twenty-feet away from the couch having been ejected from it like a ballistic missile, porn involving his brother and failed-kidnapee still moaning naughty things out of the television speakers.
That was awesome. Must admit, even though it was kind of mentioned in the summary, I still did not see the NaruSasu coming. The way Sasuke reacts to everything is hilarious. XD
| shyd1 chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
| Vice Fandonna chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
It's almost sad that that could have actually become canon with a few 'what if's'. I laughed so hard this fic was awesome.
| NotJustAGirlJustMe chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
Aw, it was actually pretty cute
| amr56 chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Oh my goodness, that was so funny. I was laughing out loud most of the time. When Kakashi just dropped in out of nowhere, though, I had to stop reading because I was laughing so hard. I also like the way all of them interacted because it shows that they're all close, and they all care very much for one another. Great story! Thanks for sharing.
| KiraK.chan chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
I feel like there could be more so this story but this was suchhhhhh a good read and so well written and hilarious OMG I loved it! Hahaha thanks so much!
| Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
Lol Kakashi. Love his trolling.
Well guess sakura has something to gossip with Ino about now.
| SlightlySociopathic chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
I was giggling all through out this fic. Good job!
| winedark chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
This was hilarious. Naruto wanting to rasengan the bathroom door was priceless.
Making Sasuke the other woman-not cool Naruto. Not cool. T_T
| The Dream Whisperer chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
It has been, god, seven years since you first posted this, but I'd just like to say that I've read this fic a thousand times and I still burst out laughing at every single point. My lungs literally HURT at the end. Actually, it's gotten to the point that I burst out laughing at the summary and doesn't stop until the end.
Thank you so much for writing this. It never fails to brighten my day.
| KD EbonyKitty chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Just a little note to say that I've reread this for about the billionth time and it has never stopped being funny. Thank you for this gem to brighten up my day! :)
| thumbsup69 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
The vocabulary tho. It was good but the dialogue could have been a tad less... Academic? Anyway it entertained me and i loved it and i love the words. Awsome fic. 2 thumbs up. More sasunaru tho.