Reviews for Cast Iron Dreams
lazy-gurl chapter 6 . 8/10/2010
wahhh this story is soo good i know you said you would finish it someday but will that someday anytime this year ...plz
rhf1229 chapter 6 . 2/14/2010
All I can really say after reading that is You are an incredibly talented writer. That fanfic was so good it was professional. The characters and the entire scenario with Sophia in Airyglyph was perfectly executed. Every little detail was so intricate and believable I felt like I was picturing what you were writing like a movie or something. I really hope you can update this amazing story.
S.Zix chapter 6 . 6/7/2009
I stumbled upon this in a haze and I find it very endearing.

It's rare to find Albel Nox written this well. Completely in character, with a spin. Sophia is also well written. I am still curious as to how the romance will develop, as I hit a mental block with Albel and romance, but given what I have seen so far, that only makes me more excited. Because if someone can do it, it will be you.

Also, I commend you for you continuous going back and editing. It'as always good to nitpick.
kc-archive chapter 6 . 3/15/2009
It was quite the pleasant surprise to see this updated again. You have such a lovely way with words, and I am very much looking forward to a speedy update.
Monochromatic Pylon chapter 6 . 3/2/2009
It's been awhile since I visited this fandom and my read former OTP fics.

I don't know why I did not read this sooner...

So far so good. The conflict is well construct and I enjoyed reading through every single scene.

I will wait for the next update.

Good day to you. :D
monkehs and fat cats chapter 6 . 3/2/2009
HO BEANS! nice story! i enjoy your stuff! so fuggin awesome that you're alive on zee internet! :.D dude! i liek miss you! havent talk to you in fo evaz!

oh yeah it's erin btw :.]
renderedvoice chapter 6 . 3/2/2009
Yay, an update! Amazing chapter which leaves me dying to know what happens next. Think I need to go and reread from the beginning though since it's been so long. XD Well wishes and hope you update soon~ :D
Lavender Wine chapter 6 . 3/1/2009
OMG! Finally! Great chapter though! update soon!
Corrupted Sanctuary chapter 5 . 12/5/2007
I really enjoyed this story. Looks like you haven't updated in a while, but, as we all know, life happens, right? :)

I love the interactions between Albel and Sophia, and you got the right time-period speeches and idioms correctly. Even the social mannerisms - perfect.

I find it interesting, that Albel's gaze always found her whenever she was doing sup-duty. It communicates to the reader an amount of interest from Albel, is not wholly naive or innocent.

Sophia's reactions and just about everything - I really enjoy when someone puts the time and effort to make sure that the character is relateable to the readers. Her thoughts and decisions are exactly what a conscientious person would do, when stranded in a place unfamiliar.

Is Albel's imprisonment still in sequence with the game's storyline? This is interesting - are they amassed in the same hallway? Open bars? Interesting.

I will wait for the next update! :D

Have a good Yule, Christmas,

Lavender Wine chapter 5 . 11/22/2007
*Goes into squealing fit* OH! That was really good! You need to update! That was so good! Update! Please?
Silver-Eyed-Elf chapter 5 . 8/14/2007
I loved how you ended the chapter. Great setup for the next one that I hope will be coming soon!
xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 5 . 7/21/2007
GREAT chapters! Please continue a.s.a.p.! _
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 2 . 6/24/2007
Mae-the lovable but strict old lady...
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 4 . 6/24/2007
Sophia dodged certain death...and lived!
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