Reviews for The Carnival
SetoEevee7 chapter 3 . 4/19/2008
I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IT IS TOTALLY AWESOME!
Unknown chapter 3 . 1/17/2008
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I AM DIEING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! I've been excited about you updating your story for along time!Please do more! It is so terrific!
Tolling chapter 3 . 1/7/2008
Moni...MYSTERIOUS...Yipes.

-String
Tera Earth chapter 3 . 1/7/2008
thats ok. I like what was updated, even if it wasnt much. Though I'm curious on how quickly his wings are growing. I mean, they did sprout up over night, so in a few hours time, how much bigger could they get?

Interested to see how String and Isume play into the story. Wondering if they work for the Ringmaster. Or work against him? DOnt know. Either way, its getting interesting.
Unknown chapter 2 . 10/6/2007
I loved it execpt for the hair part...But still I'm dying to see what happens I have a hunch to what he turns into. :-D PLEASE UPDATE SON!

O_o Godbless

P.S. I'M A BIG KAIBA FAN!
Tolling chapter 2 . 7/18/2007
Yay!I am happy!(hugs dragon elf)But, obviously, I am not Tolea anymore, but I could still be in fic...My new look is almost exactly like Dark Mousy, but gold eyes, taller, and slightly longer hair.I wear loose clothing, and I do dule monsters(my deck is dragon and spell caster centerd, with my fave cards being my rapid fire magician and my victory dragon).I could be trying to free the creatures inside the freak show, and narrowly avoiding turning into what the ring master wants me to become(a demonic tamer of creatures, which I fight, but am steadily losing). I also have 3 more chatacters, a dragon named Hiate(pronounced He-ah-te), a enchanted hwk named Isume, and another Kitsune named is a large Japanese and euro dragon mix, with a long neck and smaller body than a is black with red, and can turn into a human form, which is a tall man with long black hair, red eyes, red horns coming out of his skull, and long black finger nails. The clothing he appears in makes him seem like a very scary guy, but he actually has a upbeat and friendly personailty(he also has a very small and forgetful temper, and acts pretty dumb).He loves kids and small animals, save for chiuawas("YAPPY THINGS OF ANNOYANCE! RUN AWAY!), and is not under the ring masters control (pronounced Ih-su-meh) is a grey, large hawk, that turns into a medium sized man with longer grey hair tied up, and golden is intelligent, blunt, and persuasive, with a love for was created by me as a assistant, and he helps me with my quest to free the is well informed, and knows many rumors involving magic, occult, and so Jade is a red haired one tailed has one dark blue eye and one dark green was born in captivity, and dose not know much about his species or much else. Sweet, loves attention, and gets into things way too often for his own is, when he arrives, forced into the same cage with Tolea, where the ring master thinks she will kill him, but she dosent(in fact, she smothers him with affection!), and she grows protective of , update soon, my friend, and take my characters into concideration.

-String
Tera Earth chapter 2 . 7/18/2007
Wow. I'm impressed. You actually updated. I was starting to think you had forgotten it. Thankfully, you didnt I see. Thankfully.

I like how its going. Seto with no shirt on. *fangirl sigh*

Though how will he deal with the growing hair? he cant duct tape that...this will be interesting.
Tera Earth chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Wow. This is actually pretty good. And the ring master really freaks me out. Please continue! I really wanna know what happens next.
Tolling chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
Luna...You better continue...And, can I adsd a character to the make a wish to be in a fanfiction campain? Im gonna exepeariment with a character as old as Leanna. She is small, about 1 year younger than mokuba, and has long pink hair kept in pigtails. She has one blue eye and one green eye, and she is a Fairy. She could be a part of the freak show. She is kind, gentle, and loving. But, she can be vengeful, and rebeliouse despite her cuteness. Also, He name is not created, so... Lets go with Balina traveling teens could be here as well, but not their normal selves. Leanna is a half hawk woman, called a siren, but is just a eagle could be a werewolf,because he has wolf ears, golden animal eyes, sharp claws, and a black 's just a harmless wolf demon, though. I am myself, with a few tails, and the ability to turn into many different animals. But, I would have to be restraind, or brainwashed. And, we have Peridot, my newbie. She is a scientist that works for the circus, and is a care taker. gentle and loving, she is held there because she fears leaving and losing full control to the phoenix spirit inside of her, because the ring master has the medisin that keeps her in can also transform into flamiing animals, like a tiger, a snake, a boar, and many has long light brown hair tied back in a ribbon, sky blue, and she has Peridot green eyes, and is medium a long white lab coat, but has on a light blue skirt and a black halter top under it. She is a deadlyh aim with a small pistol she carries around, and is always getting into trouble. She isent nosy or curiouse, she just gets into way too many bad do you think of these characters? They help? Seeya next time you update!

-Tolea