Reviews for Breathing Slowly
kakashi084 chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
Good fic, no major complaints...
Iluvbeyblade chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
You like Kai/Max, I think? Good, me too. . Anyway, I loved this! I felt so sorry for Max! Having your friends take the mick out of you is horrible, but for something that he couldn't change! *hugs Max and glares fiercely at anyone else*

Poor, stupid Kai, only realising when it was too late! *pokes Kai, hard*

And the punctuation was practically flawless, well done! Love it, hate everyone for teasing Max, hate Kai for being a stubborn prick, feel sorry for him 'cause he was too scared to show his feelings ... okok, shutting up now. .

xIlbx
Lamanth chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
I sat and I read thins and then I just sat and watched the computer screen for a long time. That was amazing, there was just so much emotion and most of it was loss. It made me feel shivery and want to cry. Please, please, please keep up the amazing work kay! lol see ya

Luv Lamb