Reviews for Sparks start the fire
ampersands chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Too many similies in the first paragraph, they were good ones though. .. why is a bar in the shower room?

"His body would be her playground and a toddler she would be."

Best line ever.

When he walked over to kiss her, that seemed a little forced.

A tad out of characterness here.

They portal around an awful lot don't they? Lazy bastards.
ampersands chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
A matter of time, hm? :B can't wait to see

I like how she said she'll do whatever she pleases. Very Larxene :D Bit short though - the chapter.
Keyblader7762 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
O.O HOHOHO

XD thsi was great. it always makes meh smile to read a well written Larxel. Nicely done ]
xoILuvCloudox chapter 3 . 1/9/2008
Great chappie! Good Work :P
FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 4 . 6/22/2007
Nice, I like it...but are you going to continue here or not? I want to read more! I love it!
Fugitive chapter 3 . 4/23/2007
""He grinned roguishly as he looked down at her body, spread in front of him like a smorgasbord.""

LOL
Thunder-Angelist chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
nice! UPDATE PLZ!
White Wolf of the C.O.C.A chapter 3 . 3/6/2007
a very very vivid imagination
White Wolf of the C.O.C.A chapter 2 . 3/6/2007
interesting.. man you have a vivid imagination..nice
White Wolf of the C.O.C.A chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
nicely done!
AmethicEyes chapter 3 . 3/6/2007
This not bad really! Keep on writing!
Hariki-Angel chapter 3 . 3/6/2007
zomg that was hot...cool! U MUST UPDATE SOON SOON I TELL U!
kris126 chapter 2 . 3/4/2007
ooh... nice story so far! i can't wait for the next chapter!

*throws lots of yummy delicious cookies and chocolate covered strawberries to you*

please update soon!

kris126
Chibirebel and ldybookiie chapter 2 . 2/28/2007
oi, it is starting to heat up. Great chapter, I thought Larxene would just jump on Axel when she saw him in a towel. every fangirl would LOL.
Hariki-Angel chapter 2 . 2/28/2007
cute
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