|Reviews for When It Rains|
| Hedwig466 chapter 17 . 7/4/2011
I don't suppose there's any sort of review I could write to convince you to continue this story. I love where it's going so far, and I've never seen another story like it. A lot of times, there will be a story that's good and well written but there are about 50 others of the same nature, and that isn't true for this story. It's incredibly unique, and it saddens me that I'll never know how it ends.
Malun's family, Frex, Nessa.. all of these elements add a lot to the story, and I wish it hasn't been given up.
Please, please consider continuing this story. Even if you just add one chapter and decide you never want to see it again.
| a fan chapter 17 . 7/19/2010
really good maby you could put it up for grabs
| Anna Marie Raven chapter 17 . 6/1/2010
Hm. So, I know that you've said that this story is discontinued, but so far it is very good, and so I'm going to be favouriting it in the hopes of one day seeing an update.
| GreenBabiesRule chapter 17 . 2/5/2009
Oh this story is brilliant! Love it! Please update soon! PLease!
| SaoirseAva chapter 17 . 1/23/2009
Oh, poor Elphaba! I hope she feels better soon. And I hope Malun doesn't do anything to Nessa! Well, anyway, you've definitely got my attention with this story, so please do continue it! I'd love to see what happens next!
| SaoirseAva chapter 16 . 1/23/2009
"A pretty thing like you shouldn't be out in weather like this." Blech! Malun is such a skeezeball! Anyone who refers to a woman as a "thing," pretty or not, is disgusting. *shudder*
Hmm, about the eyes... Elphaba mentioned the look in Malun's eyes when he attacked her. Perhaps this strange ability to persuade people runs in Malun's family?
| SaoirseAva chapter 15 . 1/23/2009
Oh my Oz, this chapter was amazing! If a man ever said that stuff about me, I think I'd die, and I'm not even a girly girl! Holy wow!
| SaoirseAva chapter 13 . 1/23/2009
The Fiyeraba bit was cute (I'm a sucker for well-written Fiyeraba), but the involvement of the lake makes me shudder - the lakes on my campus are notoriously disgusting... ew. I'll just assume it was a really clean lake! ;)
| SaoirseAva chapter 8 . 1/23/2009
Oh, Fiyero's treatment of Elphaba is so sweet and tender! I love how he made her feel safe after her nightmare. Though I must admit I am worried about what her attacker and his mother are planning. I can't wait to see what happens next!
| TillITryIllNeverKnow chapter 17 . 11/5/2008
I'm so glad you picked your story back up. It's wonderful and I love the ins and outs. Please update soon!
| daynaa chapter 17 . 1/1/2008
Ah ! So good and suspensful!
| BlissfullySortOfAnonymous chapter 17 . 12/9/2007
i think this is my absolute favorite story on the whole site! fiyero is such a sweetheart, and i love how he always calls her "honey" or "sweetie".i've read this about 20 times now.
PLEASE update soon.
| The Phantom's Muse chapter 17 . 11/27/2007
Woohoo! I've missed this story. Sorry that it's taken me so long to read/review. I'm just counting the seconds till this semester is over. On top of that, I didn't have internet access during Thanksgiving Break, and then I got sick over break, which has mutated into a sinus infection with a migraine bonus. And I have a concert on Saturday! NOO!
Anyway, back to business.
'“Hey! Get away from her!” another voice called. Nessa turned her head to find a soaked and angry Boq coming down the hallway towards them, Glinda at his heels.'
-Hee...Boq is so cute when he's mad. At least he shows that he does care about Nessa in some shape or form.
'Glinda studied her. Something was different about her. Something about her eyes. This was not the girl that Glinda had been friends with.'
-Well, there's one way to get Elphaba to fight against Malun. Just tell her that he has some sort of hold on her, and she'll go after his $#.
Ooh, this is getting so exciting! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update whenever you can.
| animegalnya chapter 17 . 11/11/2007
MUST READ MORE!
| MCLBLUE chapter 17 . 11/11/2007
I am so excited you updated! Another awesome chapter! The only thing that made me sad was that it was over to quickly. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon!