|Reviews for Prison|
| Ardeliah chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Your story and the one at live journal were both excellent! Thank you both for the read!
| Socknitster chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Wow. Just wow. Really lovely. You really seem to understand the McKay character well. I cried-which is NOT something I normally do. Thank you. Really got me thinking.
| Sarah Lynne chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Getting into Rodney's brain after the events of Trinity and other missions like it is an incredible journey to read in your capable hands. I feel his emotions vividly and sharply.
Thing I loved the most: Rodney's mind set when Lorne shows up to rescue him. "What are you doing here?"... Just heart-breaking to see how bleak Rodney sees his world and situation now.
Thanks for sharing this. Now it's off to read Wildcat's accompanying story. Thanks for sharing that link, as well!
| Jen-NCIS-Lover chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Great story :)
| heartfallen chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Amazing story! Loved it
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Awesomeness! It's really really good! I love it!
| Ferryman chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Fantastic. Really, really liked it. Loved the idea that he laid his soul bare but they take a vow of silence and an oath to heal his wounds. Ah bless him.
| b7-kerravon chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Now, THIS was excellent - I loved the way the story was woven into explaining the psychological place McKay was coming from...
| krysalys chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Wow. Excellent laying on of the angst.
| jeanenjolras chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
Just going back and reviewing your work I've previously read. I really like the perspective (though wrong as it was) on Rodney that he felt he deserved what he was getting. I always like it when an author gives Rodney that doubt in himself, that vulnerability, that helps him open up a little.
| Korilian chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
You really got me a little emotional with the prison angst there. There's some room for improvement though. You have a tendency to give a lot of exposition and just tell the reader what's happening, instead of letting the characters show us.
I could explain what I mean by that, but so many people can do it so much better, so go google, or start here:
Hope there's more of this, despite the 'the end'. :)
| Wrinkled Fabric chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
You know where there's little sentences and paragraphs that you *know* are gunna be boring so you skip? Well, there was none here, I was tranfixed. Well Done, Beautiful Fic
| laurelisland chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
This was very touching and beautiful.
| Jackie17355 chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
Poor Rodney, it felt like I was there with him. I'm glad Sheppard and Lorne were able to get him out and he experienced the care of his friends. Good work, well done.
| lanthir1 chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
Wow. I like it. Didn't find much in the way of grammar mistakes. Thank you for that. I can't say much but good job.