Reviews for Namikaze Uzumaki Naruto |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You picked the least interesting genin team possible for him. I genuinly dont care at all for any member should of just kept him on anbu |
![]() ![]() Yeah no, grammar is still atrocious and I think this story is going to be a pain to read through since I’d need to shut off 99% of my brain just to understand what I’m reading. Sucks that the plot had promise but the execution is awful. |
![]() ![]() A lot of typos already, and that’s just in the first chapter. Plot has some promise though so I’ll give it two more chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nnnn |
![]() ![]() ![]() 70 feet in 2 second is kind of slow for a ninja. That is about the same speed as an Olympic sprinter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would be nice for there to be a nursery in the house and him to find it and it affect him emotionally. |
![]() ![]() This certainly is a wonderful story and different too. It’s rare to see a Naruto story where he is happy most his life. As the pairing goes I am disappointed. Gender swapping screams cheaply made characters. I strongly recommend Anko as the girl. Both have similar personality quirks and fit well together. Not to mention she is sexy as hell. I love big breasted girls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to Chapter 19. |
![]() ![]() good story. |
![]() ![]() why would his mother go into battle after giving birth? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kakashi graduated at 5... |
![]() ![]() ![]() how did they lose civilians? they had at least5 days the evacuate the village of all civilians they should've been able to leave easily and only have a bikini casualties |
![]() ![]() ![]() J'ai bien aimée ton histoire. Bonne continuation Amné |
![]() ![]() ![]() Becase 2 Ex Anbu Captians dont know about Hunter Nins and all that stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor grammar, poor pacing, overall just a drag to read. There seems to have been a decent amount of thought put into the concept, but very little |