Reviews for Home Run
JavaForever chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Uh, love it! I have discovered the first fic you ever posted! I'm excited, it's kind of like reading a Java timeline watching how your writing goes from great to awesome over the months! I love this fic. It is just so cute. And Lorelai with her constant "dirty!"'s. I see that Luke still has not become less embarrassed by those! I seriously wouldn't have believed that this was the first thing you'd ever written

Actually, I'm not a baseball fan. I can watch it, it doesn't bother me, but I don't support a team or anything. I'm not Red Sox or Yankees, I'm Swiss...I see my evil plan has been revealed! Bombard author with nice and sweet review until they offer you free cake. Then you have them eating out of the palm of your hand. ;)
R. M. Jackson chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Cute! I bet Luke would bring his son to a bunch of Red Sox games.
Browndoggy03 chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
Woah. That's just really amazing. Terrific. So cute :D I love Nolan. Hehe!
BluEeYedBRunETte726 chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
another successful story...u rock! lol...i loved it!
mcknightbabiie chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
i love how lorelai TRIED to explain a home run.. i love your stories...
EmeraldCalling chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Aw, you know who this is...

You had to put the RedSox in there didn't you, java?

Basically, this story is adorable...
FadingHippie chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
I must say that I loved this... You really captured how Lorelai talks... and thinks. It was really nice...
ggpassion chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
That was so cute! I loved it! Great job.
justawritier chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
aw. so adorable :)
sarahb2007 chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
that was cute
uvasoccerchick93 chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
aw that was cute! I think you should continue this! but like go back and have the whole Lorelai getiing pregnant and her telling Luke adn stuff. Then you could have Nolans life and then the last cahpter could be lik ethis except NOlan was like a pro baseball player at one of his games! lol. idk. ha ha
SnarkySheep chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
Well done! I think you did a great job characterizing them, esp. Lorelai :-)
BoO chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
aw soo cute