Reviews for broken RAINBOW
haru-teri22 chapter 3 . 12/3/2007
ouch, that must've been horrible for namine!

i could feel her hurt...

that roxette moment was pretty cute tho.

i wonder what would happen when time started again and olette felt that slap xD


i really really like this!

namine is like, my fav character in KH.

she can be a whole mess of things, and i enjoy seeing how people write her in their own stories.

your story intruiges me tho...

in some odd way... xD

i really wanna hear more! :}
silver moon droplet chapter 3 . 12/3/2007
m...that was pretty jessieface.

i really liked that alot

we all know because it was all about

AXEL TEH SEX GOD :] that little reference

makes me giggle. anyhow it was a job well

down just all the greenness and the eyes

connection. lovely really.

(totally time to spam)

pst you should read some of my new st00f?

please. btw i'm working on j00r prizefic

at long last. :]

lots of love,

jiv3y chapter 3 . 12/2/2007
Wow, how have I not read this before?

I like it. A lot. It's so real. I don't know... haha. It's realy good.

Hope to see more soon. :]
roses17 chapter 2 . 10/29/2007
I'm just getting into Kingdom Hearts but I really like your stuff :)

Keep writing, when you have time at school of course ;)
haru-teri22 chapter 2 . 8/19/2007
ohh is this for Nohime's contest?

haha of course it is

it's good! :D

ehh stinky marluxia

the blue blue and the

red red...

idk it's good and bad for me...

but i still like it!
WinglessSeraphim chapter 2 . 8/3/2007
This gives me more reasons to hate Marluxia and adore Demyx even more.

I love how you used color to portray this little story. Color just seems to equal Namine, ya know? XD

And I also adored how Demyx comforted her in the end with his sitar.

And now that I think about it, those colors contrast a great deal. One's harsh and loud while the other's soft and gentle.

Great fic, can't wait to read more!

SecretBox chapter 2 . 7/8/2007
Wow. I really, really liked this. I actually teared up! Omgosh, the fluff/angsty-ness was simply operfect. Demxy was so amazingly sweet in this! Blue, ahh how I do love that color. It always reminds me of sadness though (like depression), but in this case the color represented calm/serenity. At least, I think so. lol. You really are such an awesome writer.

Pardon my stupidity, but why does "Dearly Beloved" sound so familiar? I just can't place it . . .

Anyways, awesome job (as always). :]
chicagoxpillowz chapter 2 . 7/5/2007






i love how you're associating colors with the..

and the..

just okay. yeah


Inspire-Illuminate chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
Aww! so very very cute!
The Last Performer chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
I like blue more than red, too! :D Plus, Demyx is cute and more nicer than Marluxia. XD;; Yay, Demyx is so fluffy and seems like he's hitting on everyone
kai lun an chapter 2 . 7/3/2007
x33 I love Demyx.

I think that he's just adorable.

And he's so sweet to Namine here.

Love this~
silver moon droplet chapter 2 . 7/2/2007

DEARLY BELOVED? I HAVE THAT ON MAH IPOD-we are talking about the same one lolz WHO KNOWS.


and namie SQUEE OMG but red and blue AND RED man the symbolism in ur brain must be going INSANE.

in other words this was AMAZING FOO.

favies for SHO.
silver moon droplet chapter 1 . 7/2/2007

or maybe he did and i missed it.

i sure hope he didn't.

BUT IN OTHER NEWS. i am so happy i put you on alertness :)

because i got to read this and for some odd reason it made me oddly happy.

btw this was awesome :]
Jaded-Raindrop chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Yeah, I'm just randomly looking through all your uber-fantastic fics and I happen upon...THIS.

OMG, you get a cookie, 'cause that rocked.

Ew, Marluxia naughty boy. .

'Naminé sank to the floor and slowly opened her fist. The thorns dislodged themselves from her skin and the blood spurted out, leaving a red, red trail down her arm.'

Um, WOW. Loved that. Dunno why, but I loved it. _
SecretBox chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
Gorgeous. The symbolism here was just simply divine: Naminé, once pretty and pristine as the color white, tainted byMarluxia's passion, the color red. You clever genuis, you. I heart this fic. It's too beautiful for words. I've always had a soft spot for little Naminé. semi-Dark!Marluxia x Naminé just happens to be one of my guiltiest OTP's . . . along with well-written fics. Two good combinations makes for one very happy SecretBox. Definitely an instant fave.
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