Reviews for Raising Diana
eetje020 chapter 2 . 12/28/2015
I am still waiting for you to continue. Because I love it and there is further not really a story about luna getting married and this one is just too good.
Lemon Lover chapter 2 . 11/26/2015
Hi this is a lemon for Luna and Artemis lol I hope everyone likes it

-Luna and Atemis are on their "honey moon"...yeah-

"Come on Luna think think it shouldn't be taht hard to tell him" Luna says as she phases around the room they were staying in of corse without serena or anyone else their _-
"Oh it's almost sundown and I still haven't found a way to tell him really it shouldn't be that hard to tell him I mean it's what humans do...right?" Luna said uneasyly
-the door opens slowly-
"Luna are you in here" says Artemis as he walks in yawning a bit
"Um yes why were u looking for me" Luna replied while facing the other way
"uh are you ok why won't you face me?" Atemis said as he stood closer to her
"I um...just like the view over here yes...such a nice view" Luna replied looking out onto the beach trying to hide her blush
"U don't seem ok to me" Artemis said as he got into position to chase her
"What are you doing artim..." Luna said before she was cut off after Artemis started to chase her around the small but closey room
"ARTEMIS STOP IT" Luna said trying to hole back laughter but she couldent help herself she started to laugh while being chased in circles
"Hehehe come back my black Angel you know I've always been faster than you" Artemis replied as he finnaly cought up with her
-with in one second Artemis had prounced on top of his mate witch now left them facing each other -
"...Luna why are you blushing?" Artemis said raising an eyebrow
"N-n-no reason I'm puffed out from running" she replied
"Oh well we can go to bed now if you want" Artemis said looking at her
"N-no not that kind of tied you goofball" Luna said giving him a lick on his face
-Artemis begins to blush-
"Hehe so what do you wanna do then" he said getting off of his soul mate
"'s well u see I idea but...ugh I can't describe it Artemis I'm never going to get used to this" Luna said jumping up to their bed
"M-maybey we should just go to bed" Luna said
"Um I think I know what u ment Luna but u know y-you don't have to be scared to ask me" he replied jumping up on the bed and lying next to her
"...r-really" Luna replied with a bit of blush coming on
"Hehe yeah I guess I mean it's what any other couple would do right besides I've um actually been wanting to ask you for quite some time now" Artemis said blushing
"Oh well um where do u wanna start..." Luna said shyly
"Ugh well how about we just watch some...v-videos first it maybey" Artemis said clicking a button on the remote to their TV
-Artemis changes the channel to "the midnight show" and immediately they start blushing-
"H-h-how did you even no taht this channel existed" Luna said as she turned her head to him
"...pls if u wanna know go ask mina not me" he replied
-after 5 minutes of watching this "channel" Artemis did not relise that his member started to show and was growing-
-Luna looked over to him she was supprised at first knowing that he completely dident notice but soon after dident actually mind it so she moved over to him slyly without him also noticing that she had placed her mouth over his now fully erect member and started to suck on it
"W-WHAT" Artemis said shocked after he had snaped out of it, he looked down at Luna seeing her now sucking on his fully erected member "shhhhhh" Luna replied laying a playful kiss on his nose "it's not like ur gonna die besides I herd it's supposed to feel good" Luna said going back to her actions-after a few seconds
"M-m-mmmmm" Artemis let out a few moans
"Luna that feels so mmmm good" he said putting his head back
-after 3 minutes of hot sucking and moans-
"I-I can't h-hold it a-ny longer" Artemis said letting his cum out into lunas warm mouth
"Hehehe dident that feel good" she said moving up to him
All he could do at the moment was nod but soon after Luna positioned herself so that her already wet and hot pussy was near his mouth as she let her tail go higher she moved back a bit allowing Artemis to lick her pussy and play with it-
-Artemis dident take to long to relise it was his turn as he moved his tongue into her pussy licking around her walls-
"Mmmmm oh Artemis I had no idea you were so good at this" Luna said blushing but with a lustful look to her eyes
"Mmmm oh yes mmmmmm Artemis more" Luna kept on maoning till she cumed into artemises mouth
-Artemis repositioned himself to where his erected member was just outside lunas fully wet and juiceie pussy-
"W-wait Artemis w-will it hurt- Luna said quietly
-Artemis leaned in to kiss her- "only for a few seconds" Artemis said softly but caringly
-Luna new it was going to hurt but she trusted her soul mate and let it pass-
"MEROWW- Luna cried as the pain took over for at least 30 seconds
-Luna let out a few tears before she recovered from the pain
"Don't worry Luna it gets better from here" Artemis said as he started to move in and out of her pussy
"Oh y-your right it dose feel good oh" Luna replied as she started to moan intensely
"MMMMmmmmmm oh Artemis faster pls" Luna said arching her back and moaning loudly
-Artemis began to go faster as he to started to moan-
"Ohhhh Luna ur so warm mmmmm" Artemis said as he once agine picked up the speed
"Ohhhhhh yesss artemis faster yessss I can feel it get stronger Ohhhhhh mmmmmm" Luna then said
"OHH ARTEMIS YES FASTER" Luna said before geting a bit to fisty with her words but Artemis dident really care
"YES ARTEMIS HARDER YES FUCK ME FUCK ME OHHHH YESSS" Luna cried as the rage built up in her body
"ME NIETHER" she replied
"AHHHHHHHHH" they both cried out loudly after cumming in each other
"T-that was -a-amazing" Luna said puffing as she layed down beside her Soul mate who was in the same condition as her
"W-we should d-do that more" Artemis replied
"Y-yeah" Luna said before kissing her soul mate
-soon after they went to sleep and dreamed of the night they had not knowing taht Luna would soon be pregnet 1 week later lol-

I hope everyone liked it it's not my first but I will do more on other fanfic so yeah lol good bye and I hope taht some people were turned on by this hehehehe
DISLIKINGPEOPLE chapter 2 . 8/17/2015
Update, child! *a thousand exclamation marks later* !
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2014
Cute! Please update!
Ria D'Arcy chapter 2 . 8/10/2014
Picturing a fainting Artemis was a little TOO amusing to my brain. Anything that makes me chuckle deserves a review and this was pretty cute too.
Gxf chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
Macke chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
Great story, i'm waiting for next chapter. Continue please.
Ryuuohjin chapter 2 . 6/8/2013
Quite amusing, liked it
Silver Shihouin chapter 2 . 1/16/2013
pokes in face yup he fainted
danserzrulegrrl chapter 2 . 7/6/2010
MSkitty543921 chapter 2 . 4/10/2010
I love the story. please write more soon.
Nek0Nek0 chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
This is so good ! Please update it !
Nek0Nek0 chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
This is really good! You should update it!
QueenoftheSerpents chapter 2 . 12/9/2008

Thank you for starting this story. It's very good thus far, and I can't wait to see how Artemis does as a father.
Khajmer chapter 2 . 6/6/2008
I can offer a simpler explanation for why Artemis didn't catch the hint. Men simply don't look too much into food, we just eat it (yay horrible joke!)

In all seriousness though, this is adorable fluffy and now I have to go read the main series.
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