|Reviews for An Angel's Torment|
| LindaRoo chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Is this your first fanfic? Pretty good! I liked the fact that you incorporated some of his religious musings and medical knowledge into it. My bachelors' degree was in Health and Biomedical Sciences and love all things dealing with "life sciences" as well. It always surprises me how infrequently fanfic writers totally ignore the fact that he went to med school twice. Great job incorporating that in!
| Admiral Lily chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Wow. Very good stuff. :D
| LoneWolf73 chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
aww cute ending. you told edward's POV very well...i like it. two thumbs up :)
| Dazzled Dragonfly chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
W O W ! That is great. I can't wiat to see more from you!
| not done baking chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Good job, very throughough, one of the better Edward POVs I've read.
| Tee2007 chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Great writing, great storyline! I'm hoping for more?
| Animal Princess chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
"So eager for eternal damnation yet petrified of marriage...Willing to die for everyone she loves, as long as it does not involve needles in any way shape or form." i love those lines!
| wondermificent chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
WOW you are a wonderful writer! so detailed so complex its absolutely brilliant!
| DyingInParadise chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
1 word awesome continue pleez just a bit shaky
| Aulophobic Clarinetist chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
oh, wow, that was really great! i loved it!
| rin09 chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Wow. This is really good. I felt as if you captured Edward almost perfectly.
| Asquared91 chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
That was awesome.
| enigmaofherself chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
I mean, wow. That was amazing! You sound just like a professional author! You're writing is so sophisticated, and flows so smoothly. I know i can tell talent when i see it, and yours was slapping me in the face!
I know this is a oneshot, but please write more stories! I would love to read a longer story. Keep writing!