Reviews for The Awakening
starboy454 chapter 28 . 3/9/2015
excellent
Guest chapter 28 . 1/26/2015
That was freaking hilarious! I've never laughed so hard while reading a Star Wars fanfic. Absolutely loved it!
Guest chapter 28 . 6/25/2014
Lmaoo live it and the rest of your stories
JediCasons chapter 6 . 7/22/2013
Haha may the foreskin be with you lol. I can totally see that as the real name of a Star Wars porn.
Guest chapter 28 . 10/28/2012
O God. That was funny. I was cracking up with laughter. What was my reaction. OMG!
Padawan Sydney Bristow chapter 6 . 7/17/2012
Hello! I used to read your stories years ago...now that I'm back to , I was so excited to find that you're still writing! Anywho, this story is hilarious and I just had to comment on this chapter and say that you had me in a fit of giggles!
HyperCaz chapter 28 . 4/15/2012
This has to be one of the best comedy fics I've ever read. I giggled like mad through every chapter and your writing had some actual depth (hard to find in humour fics these days) so it was all the more enjoyable. I will probably re-read this right now...
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 28 . 6/22/2011
amazing story! Can only imagine what sort of chaos must be at the Temple... if Obi-Wan's own reaction was so strong that Padme was "infected" by it... at the temple there are hundreds of Jedi's of both genders (meaning, they don't even have to go outside to find partners, but it's as easy as going into the corridor) who's libidos have just been set free and their hormones are multiplying each other's libidos... creating a force of hormones exponentiated by thousands, strong enough to last for months of nonstop behaviour... it must be like that club Garen took them, Jedis having sex everywhere. the Tempe will have a HUGE influx of new recruits in the next few years, starting with 9 months, lol.

I loved this fic, sad to have it end so open-ended.
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 18 . 6/22/2011
lol, imagine being in Padme's place... coming out of your bathroom to realise the Jedi you thought were the embodiment of serenity, calm, self-control, etc. actually looked to be a perverse peeping-tom, rofl. Obi-Wan was lucky, on Earth he would've been rotting in jail even before he'd wake up from his coma.

Yup, she sure came to curse having sent for Qui-Gon. :D
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 15 . 6/22/2011
First off, I freaking adore this fic. The padawans' quest to figure out what was being done to them was funny, but Qui-Gon's and Yoda's conversation was hysterically funny, especially Yoda's insistence that they drink tea and his reaction to finding out they had none. I read it before,a couple of days ago, but only skimmed through it, now I'm reading each chapter carefully, so I already know how it's gonna end and gotta say I love it. Though, with their overactive libidos and how many times Ben and Padme gave into their feelings I half-expected there being a consequence 3/4 of a year later. Maybe there's a reason that hadn't happened and will find out only during this more-thorough reading.

PS: PLEASE resume writing "Destiny's Promise"!
xsoulryder chapter 28 . 5/15/2011
Phew that was hot! N funny too. wish u mentioned on how prestigious jedi masters at the temple dealt w the situation. can't imagine yoda w a raging hard on.
General Kenobi SIYE chapter 14 . 4/11/2011
Hahaha! Flashbacks of Clitori! Classic! Sounds like an awesome planet I'd LOVE to visit! XD
Princess Ashira chapter 28 . 2/5/2011
Oh, wow that made me giggle. A great way to start off a lazy Saturday. That was a wonderful and hilarious story.
MadBrilliant1880 chapter 28 . 7/18/2008
love the last line!
MadBrilliant1880 chapter 27 . 7/18/2008
hot!
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