|Reviews for Bleached Marimo|
| eiram azira chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
PLEASE UPDATE! :(
| magical fan18 chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
You need to fix your grammar, and it is hollow's not hallow's for the bad spirits.
| Bear of Cali chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
This is one seriously poor start to a crossover. Let me address its biggest problem:
You had Zorro, one of the biggest badass in One Piece, cower and immediately surrender to a hollow. Zorro should have trying to fight the hollow, even if it was pointless. Ichigo tried with a goddamn folding chair so what happened?
Second problem, you are seriously taking 'talking is a free action' thing to extreme levels. Luffy and Zorro had what sounded like a casual conversation, while Luffy was about to be eaten by a hollow. Also, your inconsistent. One moment Zorro is strongly bound, next he wiping off the maker on his face, then he's bound again.
Third problem, while I would overlook some grammar and spelling problems, there are far too many in this, and it really distracts from the story. Not only that, you use the '...' way to many times, even when it's completely unnecessary.
While I do see that there are more chapters, the opening chapter is a bad start, and I'm not hooked to continue reading, or care what happens next.
| Mon Esprit Libre chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
| Guest chapter 46 . 7/15/2013
UPDATE ALREADY, DAMMIT!
| RoronoaZoroWGS chapter 46 . 7/12/2013
this is amazing update when you can!
| Sayomi-Ookamichi chapter 46 . 5/17/2013
please finish this, i got so absorbed into this!
| Knuckles chapter 15 . 4/13/2013
I know I haven't made a review yet I think and just to get this off my chest I'm a very big Zoro fan girl and loves bleach I completely love how you got Kisuke's personality and I love your sence of humer you are a great wrighter...bueeeeeeeee
| Radio Driver chapter 46 . 4/10/2013
Good goin, Emma. Keep on keeping on.
| AshK1980 chapter 46 . 4/10/2013
Nice work on this update as always!
| erica.phoenix16 chapter 46 . 4/9/2013
Ha. Ha. Nice breaking the fourth wall.
| L.I.N.A.T chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
No offense to you, but don't draw anything, especially if it's as bad as you say...Rukia and Luffy's drawing together...it's to horrible to thibk about. Hehehe :)
| Guest chapter 35 . 2/13/2013
Good story, but my only criticism would be that the tone of this fic is all over the place. The tonal shifts kinda give me whiplash.
| ShadicZX chapter 26 . 2/9/2013
twin chakarams...kingdom heaarts
| DragonNOOB chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
about damm time I see someone write this. A story where zoro gets soul reaper powers all I will say is this godly zooro anyone...nah i know you prob have balanced him somewhat