i cant believe it took till the batcave for me to realise ive read this amazing story before... lmfao

reaaaly enjoying this story
unfortunatly not a narkag fan.. but am just in love with your sesskag writing
just excellent interactions, and passion and growth!

Yaayyyy

And this is why one does not go where one k own a trap is waiting ...
You fake it and then you separate and attack from different sides ...and this is why one should get other to help. ..like the wolf pack of kouga or some inu. ..or the little bat hanyou girl who did take over the coven of her birth. ...they could fly im silently and found the trap.
. Or even jinenji with his knowledge of herbs and plants . The kitsune school ... or who ever else...

But big warlord sesshomaru did run into this trap... they should at least have left the kids with kaede under sutra protection from miroku. ..

When the coins he did give her for the merchant was more than the average peasant family makes in a year ...then a handful arrows is not enough ...
And really why even pay for it...sango is demon slayer she must have learned how to make weapon and also arrows...so a forge wound be enough to make arrow heads or one could make them from stone or even obsidian or wood... the shaft of the arrow they can make to the hundreds in there free time around the fire or while some help rest...
And fletchling she also can make from feather ...some thin strings of leather to secure it all nicely ...from there hunts...and ready you are for some hundreds nice arrows...a handful will get her nowhere ...she needs at least two to three full quivers and some easy to pull on her side... also a short sword and knife is a must have for close defense ...

Not sure if one can say poor kagura, I mean when she really did want her freedom there would be some ways open...some sheming ...some goodygoodbrokenminnion playing ... she must know how to write some or draw it up. ..she could let the wind carry a letter to the group or a drawing with her plan and ask for help...or a way to find narakus lair with his time of the month human day
...and when it comes together she poisons his poison hive...destroys the mirror , and had some easy to follow trail laid out to narakus hidden place... she could poison him with some him unknown poison while he ..rapes her...I mean a tiny scratch he will not think about...
she could lead them to his hidden heart or use it against him...like when she had this evil baby creation who had the heart of onigomo in him...some nice active volcano or to hot to bath hot not onsen. ..just throw it and let boil to the bones..
To die is also freedom for her...

But she is right...narakus is sadly to clever ...but also got a way to big ego and power trip and so makes mistakes .

Some good long time planed and written and drawn out on paper trap could help...sesshomaru is a strategist and warlord...he should have people who he could use or plan with ...to get more fighting power...other inu or other humanoide youkai

Rin is a little kitsune in disguise. ..or clever young teen girl
And sesshomaru ...no words for him...sly old young dog ...his behavior shows how young he really still is -
But I wonder. ...how his reaction is when he will finds out what poodle are...in the future ;)

I loved ah-uhns and Rin's thoughts -

Shippo was funny - he hopes he will not act like then older and never grow up...he or Jago me should write this up...and shows his girlfriend in 500year's when he life's hopefully to her time or she together with him to his teen years years and later the little fun blackmail for her ;)

Will be interesting when kouga shows up and declares her as him woman again

You want to know something funny...I read some time ago a Naraku kagome pairing ...where he changes his way and becomes something like a ..good guy...I think he rescued her...with later some child's later and a mansion around the well and sesshoumaru who wanted to still killing him... .till he fakes his death and takes new name...
So I think one really could write great Naraku kagome pairings ...and sesshomaru and naraku look real nice and fit...also in body - ...a threesome between them could be real hot ...both are mostly very calm and controlled but with big temper wilderness strenght and an fun darkplayful side and way to many years of knowledge ...and think about youkai baby could look between them... some half some full inu and halfspider whatever is dominant on Naraku when he would turn full demon...or where full demon or even his mixed youkai as he is ...that I found funny

Interesting start of a pairing
Naraku made a mistake. ..he thinks there are already deeper feelings of love and lust ... but both at the point are just somewhat pulled to each other and start to be lightly interested ...so now his plans would not work just possible push them faster and deeper together ...a stronger growing bond than destroying them with what ever plan...

Inuyasha really seems to start learning

The way Sesshomaru be gaslighting my girl here

Not Sesshomaru's favorite hobby being bullying his orphan half-brother and teasing horny virgins-

Wow reading sesshomaru's thought and reaction for kagome makes me imagine how HANDSOME HE WAS!
SORRY INUYASHA...IN SERIES YEAH I LIKE U AND KAGOME BACK THEN BUT HONESTLY I REALLY WANTED KAGOME TO END UP IN SESSHOMARU!THATS WHY I ALWAYS SEEK SESSKAG FANFIC(

Uf, me encanta cuando viven juntos toda la vida.

I like your story, just wish you’d take out “bipolar” since it plays down what people actually go through who have it. It’s not mood swings. It’s sex, drugs, drinking, shopping, depression, and bursts of feeling on top of the world.

Ah-Un’s bit was so funny, especially their thoughts about Jaken! It made me think about how in no fanfic I’ve ever read has Jaken ever gad a partner. This makes me want to write a fic where he ends up with someone! Not a dedicated story but at least let the guy be happy and have a family. How cute would that beeeee?