Reviews for In Plain Sight
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 1 . 3/7/2018
Aaaw, this is how it shold've gone in the anime. I do believe the original overstressed the fainting, waaay over the top, and I did not like that. Your version is better :)
Tw33ty JR chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
That was a sweet one-shot 3
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Hahaha, what an ending! Aww man, that was excellent.

One very awesome oneshot. Way to go DaMoyre. XD

-adds to favorites-
emmy.raen chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
FirstBornofMainHyugaHousehold chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
That was hilarious! I love the ending!
kitsunechan1227 chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
That was soo KAWAII!You just have to keep writing more this was so awesome!
Alliriyan chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
That's the best ending ever, but more please please please? If you can manage it?

I agree with all the other reviews. This is so good!
Brennerdee chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
That was great, perfecting timing on everything, and everyone was great. In character, that is. I love the ending too. It was hilariuous. Great job, you wrote wonderfully.
monko25 chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
That was great! Loved it

mushin chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
this story is awsome! i lov iot! it;s soo cute! the ending is funny too! you have a real talent!
Nara Shikaku chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Haha! that was pretty funny. nice job!
juliagulia1017 chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
while i'm not a big fan of naruhina, i must say that this was wonderfully written, and i admire how you kept everyone in character.

faving this. thanks for the nice read~!
AngolMoaChan chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
*squeal* I so wasn't expecting the ending of that!

This was very well written: I love the simile for Hinata's eyes.