Reviews for It's All Coming Back To Me
smile-clarenet chapter 12 . 6/30/2011
Nicely done.

I think I need to go back and read over previous chapters. I don't recall Mia leaving RS. Probably because it's so long since I last read this one.
Apocolypse Dragon chapter 12 . 6/30/2011
Wow, it's been a while since I recieved a notification from this website.

Groovy chapter. Your writing style has chaged quite a bit since I last read a chapter from what I remember. It seems a lot more balanced and less EdwardxBella-ish. Good job.
Kina chapter 10 . 4/12/2008
Yeah well... if she was 26 in CA, and Thunder was 27, that would make HIM a year older than HER... (commenting on the italics)

I don't know why I love reading this chapter so much... maybe it IS the cute romance Thunder/Susannah junk I'm falling in love with...

Mystery/Misery is more my thing right now, along with Kina/Deja Vu, Thunder/Kina, and a few other smaller pairings...
ThunderWhy'dYouDieOnMe chapter 12 . 1/14/2008
Okay, so it's me, BRR56 *winces* Can't sign that name anymore.

Couldn't even sign it up there, too lazy to log in... almost cried the other day writing the note for my story.

Lord, what is this? All us Cars fans- it's just- Cars has no potential anymore, does it?

I guess one day... well... I don't know...

Gabby, great sort of end of little Thunder thing (notice: I normally call him Thundy- not no more). Was he going possessed?

The bad thing- Thunder dying no longer makes me cry. Heck, I hope no one reads this, but when I kill Thunder in a certain story, then reread it, I almost always cry. Today, I read it again, and I didn't cry.

Gabby- maybe we both should just leave the Cars section for awhile. Take a little Cars vacation.

I don't know. Anyways, if I ever find what I had of this same thing (and the way the little Thunder thing ended was really creepily like this) I will type it up and send it to you.

See ya on the other side, cyber sis.
foreignconcepts chapter 12 . 1/13/2008
Fandom Raider, I love it :)

Well Gabby, it saddens me that you aren't going to take this the entire way and finish it off, but I do have to give you credit for giving it a final shot with this last chapter. Very very good. It's been a long year for you, I know, and I don't expect you to be the same by the end of it. If you can't feel you can write the same way anymore, that is understandable. I hope you and BRR56 will stick around (even if you're not writing) because we still appreciate your reviews and any contributions you may have for us who are continuing on.

Thunder Hicks chapter 8 . 11/19/2007
Lord, second review for this today.

Me loves the last part! My baby Thundy... man, he is digging himself a deep hole of trouble... poor Thundy...
Thunder Hicks chapter 5 . 11/19/2007
Well, you should know who this is... I haven't reviewed under this name since Behind The Wheel...

The reason I'm reviewing again is simple- I love this story! And my Thundy baby is a star!

Although, Susie's cheating on Mater with him... god, now I'm thinking of the Carrie Underwood song Before He Cheats...

My baby Thundy has grown up so much... and to think, he started off last year as a Ferrari! *bursts out crying and runs off*

Anyways, I still love this story SO much... I'm working on chapter 12 for ya- let's hope I can live up to the greatness of it so far!
Buick Regal Racecar 56 chapter 11 . 6/2/2007
Sorry I never reviewed this! I've read it so many times...

This chapter is awesome! More of Thunder, more of Duncan, more of other characters...

So, Sally knows about what's going on between Thunder and Susannah? That can't be good!
a-spoonful-of-fantasmic chapter 11 . 5/30/2007
i like it. u need to put lot more of sally and lightning if u want more readers. that is wat the marjority of readers like. so..jus suggestion. that i highly advise
Apocolypse Dragon chapter 11 . 5/30/2007
Hehehehehehe! NICE JOB m'dear honey pot.
smile-clarenet chapter 11 . 5/28/2007
Hmm, interesting chapter. Little curious about this angela character.
foreignconcepts chapter 10 . 5/13/2007
Hey there Gabby... wow, I am amazed at the amount of conflicts between characters that you've built up just 10 chapters into this! I think things are going well so far, but I missed the part where Susannah and Thunder seemed to be getting so close post-hookup. I should go back and reread to catch up on that. You seem to be using the flashback concept quite heavily in this story compared to your last ones. It seems to work, although as DSB said, it is going to leave you with a lot of characters and subplots to keep track of! But overall a great chapter.

The only thing that I found disconcerting was the scene with Susannah and Thunder, how you have the regular text depiction actions in the present and what thunder is fantasizing/wanting to happen. At some points where you had similar events happening concurrently, it was a bit hard to follow. I found myself reading the regular part first then going back and reading the italics to put it all together. That's my only criticism :)

Your last 2 paragraphs are fine, they don't say too much but they say just enough. How can you go wrong with ending a chapter with a line like "...I've wasted my life with Mater..."? Thats a powerful statement that will definetly keep ppl coming back. I guess what I want to know is, has she really given up on her marriage at this point?

I'm off to bed before I find myself tomorrow morning passed out in front of the computer.

Buick Regal Racecar 86 chapter 10 . 5/13/2007
Well, I just HAD to read this again, and I just HAD to review- I haven't read any stories in four days! Yikes!

Well, still good, this must be my 15th time reading it? 16th? I've lost count...

Anyways, I so can't wait for the next chapter!

Sorry- I can't help with ideas. I'm stuck with my own story, Dangerous Sparks.
Apocolypse Dragon chapter 10 . 5/13/2007
Another awesome chapter from a not quite as awesome writer! _ (only teasing). Am I being retarded or are you asking for more characters? Cause if you are, how about that idea with Chuck turning Sarges surplus store into a an SUV/Offroad upgrade store and he could take over Sarge's 4X4 boot camp and what ever else you may come up with...(MIA/Chuck/Gravity) BWAHAHAHAHAH!

Keep it up love! _
wolfgrl1492 chapter 10 . 5/11/2007
Okay, so Susie's in love with Thunder? Okay, so like, what's gonna happen? Is she gonna have his kid?

Oh, I have a good voice idea for Andene. Dakota Fanning could do her.
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