Reviews for Sleeping Beauty
Siriusmunchkin chapter 15 . 1/31/2010
Bella's admitting being able to smell blood. Where will that lead? Like this meadow. My bet is Edward becomes persistant in his questioning until she tells him the truth.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 14 . 1/31/2010
Lord Newton's son Michael is still a twit and Jessica still needs to learn when to keep her mouth shut. Who will notice the blood first?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 13 . 1/31/2010
Edward is a stargazer. I love going outside and watching the stars. He's admitted they're vampires. Now we'll see what happens next.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 12 . 1/31/2010
Snowball fights can be fun. Very observant of Bella to notice the Cullen's didn't act like regular vampires. Though the only things she knew about vampires were from story books and old records. And doubt they had anything good to say. Wonder what Edward's going to say? What is he going to ask Bella? Will she ask him to make her immortal so she won't die when she turns 16? It's not like she's going to have a normal human life if she's cursed to die so he doesn't have an excuse not to.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 11 . 1/31/2010
Alice will always be Alice. Shopping for new clothes will always be her greatest passion. Well maybe Jasper comes first, or maybe it's a tie. Edward now knows she is aware they are vampires. Does King Carlisle know about Bella's curse? Would he keep it from Edward. Will he encourage Edward to change her so they can be together forever? Will Bella ask him to change her before she dies at 16? Could it be the curse really isn't a curse, but a prophecy that she will become immortal on her 16th birthday?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 10 . 1/31/2010
You can put anything in your story you wish to. That's why it's called fanfiction. It's not supposed to be like the books. It's a nice journey. Of course Bella is going to get into some kind of trouble. She wouldn't be Bella if she didn't.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 9 . 1/31/2010
Like Bella's descriptions of the city around the castle and then the countryside. The poignancy and sadness in her voice when she thinks he can't hear. The brightness when he's describing the castle he lives in and the lands surrounding it. She's enchanted by him and though she isn't aware, she's fallen in love. The almost kiss.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 8 . 1/31/2010
Fluff can be fun. I see Alice is the same no matter what, lol.

It's going to be fun to see what life in the castle is like. Are the servants human? Do the peasants or whatever they are know the King is a vampire? Wonder what Sophie's going to do when she realizes who her princess is bethrothed to? Lots of fun to come.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 7 . 1/30/2010
It's your story, manipulate however and whatever you want. It is such an enjoyable story. A fairtale romance, the prince saves the princess and they live happily forever. Sounds like a good plan to me. Though there is usually some darkness before the happy forever ending.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 6 . 1/30/2010
Romantic. Young love. Destiny. And smiles and sunshine.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 5 . 1/30/2010
Lots of fun. Like a good enchantment had been cast over Bella for the evening.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 4 . 1/30/2010
Wonderful! This is such a fun story to read. All your little details make it so very real.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 3 . 1/30/2010
Really well written. Enjoyable like any fairytale should be.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
This is fun. Fairytales are meant to be enchanting and you are doing a good job fullfilling that end.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Like the beginning.
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