Reviews for Project Rebirth: Unit One
Cooltony101neo chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
I really liked how this chapter went, also when will you reveal why the yondaime did the project?
TheDon1023 chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
Naruto deserves to get laid damnit(does he even have the equiptment to get laid?). i can see him not getting married or somethin but he should have some sex friends or somethin close to that. anyways thanks for the update, i almost thought you were gonna abandon the fic. anyways until next time

-The Don
Delusional Fishies chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
So all he has to do is restructure himself so that he has no bonds of "friendship" with anyone in the village. Then the fun can start.
Matthew Blackheart chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
um cool
Kaja'Rang chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
have you read the manga? yondaime is his father and naruto looks more like his mother, but i really like this story, the deception his wholemlife was lie. great job!
stewart92 chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
great story
Pandawasmyballpen chapter 2 . 1/20/2008
This is so sephiroth like from ff7. all naruto needs now is to bleach his hair white and find and alien to call his mommy :)
Son of the morning chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
ARGH! such a great chap! I can't wait till you update the next one. you know what they say, "procrastination is just like masturbation. you wake up one morning and you find that your just screwing yourself over." peace!
RyuLong chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
Good story so far. The story seems a bit rushed at times when details appear a bit skimpy, but aside from that, it's good. By any chance, have you ever watched Gundam 00? Your Akatsuki is quite similar to Celestial Being.
Sharkteeth chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
great chapter i like the ending, very powerful
kira tenshi chapter 3 . 11/13/2007
This is a very interesting idea and plot line (so far). I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter. So hurry and update for this and your other story, . . . what was it? The "Path We Walk" or something like that.
frytrix chapter 2 . 11/12/2007
this is a really good story, whatever you do, do not wuit it_
Elemeffayoh chapter 3 . 9/9/2007
thats is totally fucked up man using Unit One to kill
Elemeffayoh chapter 2 . 9/9/2007
HOW DID OROCHIMARU SURVIVE? didnt naruto kill him?
Elemeffayoh chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
dude that is fucked up
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