|Reviews for Children Within|
| littleonegi chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
You keep going with this. Don't make it a one-shot.
| bluesonmondays chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
This is swet. Thanks for writing.
| Ariana Lupin chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
I really like this, it brought a smile to my face to think of Near and Mello playing out in the rain like the normal non-genius children do. I think you described the idea and scene well and the anticipation of the storm was really well written too. Good story!
| Super Saiyajin Priscila chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
this will be the favorite of my favorites,
thanks for the beautiful story!
| blah chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
hello, i think the story was very nice and had a nice plot. however, the lack of proper punctuation made reading it very difficult. it seemed very rushed... but i liked the story (:
| Black Bunneh chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
| Inu chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Nice. Looking forward to read the next