|Reviews for Born of Boredom|
| weird dream girl chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I liked it how they told stories, in the story, that was something you don't read everyday,it was neat, and then they talked about them.
| Alaina Ross chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
okay I have a question for bec...
So every once and a while in a story a little spark seesm to start between you and sheppard, but quickly ends as the story ends. will you two ever get together? I hope so...
| Atheneon chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
That's very cool. I like it!
one tiny bitty suggestion though...some of the dialogue would flow better with more contractions.
| Padme4000 chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
that was another brilliant story
next question for any of the hog team
Where you always interested in the job area you are in now?
| Alipeeps chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
An interesting idea for a story but I have to say that your writing needs a lot of work - you have a *lot* of spelling and grammar mistakes - changing tenses in the middle of a phrase etc - and lots of mixed homonyms; things like to instead of too, here instead of hear, are instead of our, there instead of their, etc.
Asking someone to beta-read your work for you would help with this - at the moment there are so many mistakes in your writing that it becomes distracting and puts me off from wanting to read further, which is a shame...
| Reefgirl chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Great stories, Can I borrow Bec and the boys again please
| Brogue chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Hi there, I've not read your stuff before and I just happened to stumble on this. It's great - funny and cute. I have a question for Bec, what brand of hair gel does Shepard use and how did he cope during the time the expedition was cut off from Earth? Did he take a 6 month supply or did they have to trade for it?