|Reviews for The Dark Mark|
| SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 15h ago
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| SereniteRose chapter 28 . 2/12
I'm sorry but the ending could of been better
| AnUnopenedBook chapter 28 . 1/11
Fab story. Thanks for sharing.
| Stella Purple chapter 10 . 12/11/2013
Well, this is not that bad. There are still rooms for improvements. Try to develop more plot, make chapters longer, etc.
| Sevarina chapter 29 . 8/24/2013
ooooohh i would love an alternate ending. i know people say this all the time even though they are lying but i was legit crying when tom and mione died.
| Sevarina chapter 26 . 8/24/2013
even though i was laughing hysterically at the way you brought up snape 's death i could help but feel bad cus hes my favorite character ever
| Sevarina chapter 25 . 8/24/2013
well that explains more but i cant help but to feel bad for george i think he felt a little more than friendship towards her
| Sevarina chapter 23 . 8/24/2013
urg! i really need to find out who Voldy suspects her real parents are and draco is just a big softy in this story i love it! The Gryffindor princess goes to the dark side and the Slytherin Prince goes to the light. too much irony. XD
| Sevarina chapter 22 . 8/24/2013
i wonder if lupin was already on their side and this mission was just another test to see if they had the skills.
| Sevarina chapter 21 . 8/24/2013
so there's only two options its either that Lucius and Narcissa are her real parents which would give even more reason as to why he adopted her or its that in some made up way that you managed to make work Severus is her father which would finally bring him into the story but would come with many complications for mione since he is still good as you have hinted throughout the story
| Sevarina chapter 20 . 8/24/2013
convince lupin to help kill potter sorry but im thinking that this is impossible
| Sevarina chapter 18 . 8/24/2013
oh gods poor mione. not because she was adopted by lucius, no, i would love to be a malfoy but because draco hates her and now she has to spend the rest of her life with him
| Sevarina chapter 11 . 8/23/2013
lol from your second comment im guessing many people were giving you a hard time about the topic of your story. you seemed a bit angry i would be too but nonetheless the story is great so far
| Princess of Mirkwood2 chapter 29 . 8/11/2013
love it tell the ending. please write an alternat ending.
| Strawberri Leigh chapter 27 . 4/3/2013
What. The. Hell? I hate it! ILOVEIT! I- I don't know! It's an amazing story; I'm not saying that it's bad! It just- I can't even form words... Tom's background and the Dark Lady idea were my favorite parts. Dumbledore, I hate him in the end of this story! And I was surprised Draco would actually go to the Light side... w