Reviews for The Dark Mark
draco'snumber1slytheringirl chapter 26 . 2/6
I absolutely adored this story. all ur othr reviews were rather condescending. i like short chapters in stories because then it doesnt drag on.
I'm sorry chapter 5 . 12/29/2014
But this story is horrible!
Abbey Whitlock chapter 5 . 12/14/2014
this plot line seems good, but reading the excessive notes and short chapters is physically hurting me. Stop explaining yourself. Just do your shit. You're an author, write, no need to defend every effing chapter of why it is the way is.
Meh chapter 8 . 12/7/2014
thisll sound harsh but from one author to another, tough love is the way to go. This story sucked in the sense that the chapters were short, the details were minimul, i would understand harry being a dick but him being a total baby is just waaaaaay off that it killed it for me. The story went by too quickly, and i gotta say i stopped after chapter 8. I opened this because i saw that there were so many ratings and favs but i am honestly very disappointed
Guest chapter 29 . 11/30/2014
Can u plz do an happy ending for hermione and tom
SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
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SereniteRose chapter 28 . 2/12/2014
I'm sorry but the ending could of been better
AnUnopenedBook chapter 28 . 1/11/2014
Fab story. Thanks for sharing.
Stella Purple chapter 10 . 12/11/2013
Well, this is not that bad. There are still rooms for improvements. Try to develop more plot, make chapters longer, etc.
Sevarina chapter 29 . 8/24/2013
ooooohh i would love an alternate ending. i know people say this all the time even though they are lying but i was legit crying when tom and mione died.
Sevarina chapter 26 . 8/24/2013
even though i was laughing hysterically at the way you brought up snape 's death i could help but feel bad cus hes my favorite character ever
Sevarina chapter 25 . 8/24/2013
well that explains more but i cant help but to feel bad for george i think he felt a little more than friendship towards her
Sevarina chapter 23 . 8/24/2013
urg! i really need to find out who Voldy suspects her real parents are and draco is just a big softy in this story i love it! The Gryffindor princess goes to the dark side and the Slytherin Prince goes to the light. too much irony. XD
Sevarina chapter 22 . 8/24/2013
i wonder if lupin was already on their side and this mission was just another test to see if they had the skills.
Sevarina chapter 21 . 8/24/2013
so there's only two options its either that Lucius and Narcissa are her real parents which would give even more reason as to why he adopted her or its that in some made up way that you managed to make work Severus is her father which would finally bring him into the story but would come with many complications for mione since he is still good as you have hinted throughout the story
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