Reviews for You Try Too Hard
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
He knows she one of the most powerful empaths on the planet. She's a living, breathing lie detector. Why would he even CONSIDER not being completely honest with her? Knucklehead.

(Yeah, it was a good story.)
sweetfiresnow chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Nice! I really liked this oneshot thingy lol!
titanfan45 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
I liked this, it left the reader to decide what happened next.
Not G. Ivingname chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
good for a storie written at 3:00 AM... you should write WHAT he says
Moondragonheart chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Hah, I'm suprised he didn't blow up or something, but I like how it turned out. Good job! -
Raven's secret-keeper chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Nice.

Not a BB/R fan, but still, I like it.
Aki Hotaru chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
-stares wide-eyed at the screen with mouth wide open-

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I. Love. You.

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I love you.

THIS.

FANFICTION.

THIS.

ONESHOT.

THIS

THIS

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THISKLHTJDFGHLSFD

IS. AMAZING.

The last line. Is fucking amazing.

THE ENTIRE THING.

Oh my God I'm your biggest fan _

-adds to every favourite list ever-

-WORSHIPS-
Arcaten chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Why is it that the best one-shots are thought of at 3 in the morning? Seriously, this is like the dozenth (sp?) time I've read one imagined/posted at 3 am.
Nelly-Crystal chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
love the history... but now my mind is flying far away i'm imaging a lot of ends ... anyway ' bye
Tammy Tamborine chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Heh, that was cute._
Agent of the Divine One chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
I think that this topic merits a little more exploration, such as a verbal response from Beast Boy.

Please? :)
Kaiju Moth chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
HAHA! Nice job.
6StringSamurai13 chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
GAH...what a tease at the end. Good job on the characterizations for BB and Raven. The whole idea for the story was really good, I could totally see Raven getting fed up one day and finally asking him. His responses were well done too. Good job on the dialogue and I liked how it ended...well...I would have wanted a bit more, but I suppose it ended at a good spot :-D. Keep up the good work!