It almost seems like everybody is more mature than Harry.

I almost wish Hermione had indeed pulled Severus down and held him in her arms, if only to see his face...

Even though I do understand Severus' frustrations, Harry really ought to learn Occlumency...

I had fun picturing these three teachers play-acting students. I think Severus and Minerva were both rather based on Hermione...

Ah! Severus and his words' games... And Harry and Ron aren't reacting as good friends should...

That was an interesting discussion.

I'm very proud of Hermione for the way she stood her ground against Molly.

That Rule of Replacement does seem appropriately archaic for such an old institution as Hogwarts.

Well, Hermione's got guts, you have to give her that.

Very intriguing beginning. I wonder about Destiny-Link.

OMG this was brillant , i cried , laughed and had this feeling in my heart. i one way i love it more than the original 3 If you read this please write on facebook Ola Ochnik i need to talk to you 3

This. Was. Amazing. Loved loved loved! I love how you clarify stuff at the end of each chapter too. I didn't see a single typo or mistake which I was also impressed about. Thank you for writing this wonderful fanfic. :)

This was a fantastic story with an interesting plot! I really enjoyed reading it & loved how you added little facts that made the story feel real. Wonderful job!

It is a very good story, though I don't think the last chapter was useful.

Good game description.