Reviews for In Your Dreams |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The class teaching was hilarious! The Sorting Hat's song was very nice! Especially in the end! ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was quite a surprise seeing Malfoy at the marriage! Hilarious! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This reply was really funny! " Professor, that's the nicest way anyone's ever called me a know-it-all" It was touching what Severus said about Albus being a sort of father for him :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot was great. Hermione cries a lot. I quite liked the friendship between Neville and Draco. I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a well-written & creative story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Argh! Such a cliffhanger! I'm enjoying this a lot, though I think Ron's twotiming is stupid - in that he's doing it, not in how you write it. I look forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I have to admit that I am utterly impressed with your story. Not only did you research and have a wonderful knowledge of the Harry Potter universe, you also researched the muggle "world" when necessary. Your prose was very skillful and I was one of those readers that was relieved when you did not go into explicit detail about the marriage bed. So many romance stories always get hung up on the mechanics of sex and end up ignoring the actual relationship. I also thought the small hints about Draco's feelings (negative or positive) for Hermione very interesting. Neville's role in this was also very appreciated. I have a lot of other things to say but I can't possibly remember it all. This was a very nice piece of work and I enjoyed thinking about it and reading it a lot. Thanks for writing (no matter how long ago this was written), 95 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always did like owls. Draco did have a crush, then didn't he. Yay for characters growing into good people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's irritating, but realistic for Hermione to act her age at this point. Attaining legal adulthood does not arbitrarily grant any of us instant wisdom and maturity. (As much as dear Severus might wish it so.) Btw, I'm enjoying your story - thanks for sharing. Also, I appreciate Severus' mentorship with Draco and am hoping Hermione and Draco can at least reach neutrality if not warmth. She seemed to make a breakthrough in that direction with the receipt of her gift. The conversation below seems to be hinting at something. Hmmm - must keep reading to uncover more.. "I can't bear to think of you two together," he said. "Then don't. Nothing is gained by thinking about it. You know that I am sorry." "How can you be sorry?" Draco spat. "I'm sorry that you wish it otherwise..." |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your fic was recommended on livejournal yesterday and I'm so glad it was. This is such an imaginative take on the saga. In some ways i like your ending better than DH! And the relationships you crafted with such care were the cornerstones of your great work. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's very slippery... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This line: "Yes," Draco said slowly. "So did I. Some dreams come true." His spoon stilled. "And some don't." That line just broke my heart. Completely. I mean... it's Draco. I just want to give him a big hug and tell him everything will be alright. Always in the corner of my eye while reading this was poor Draco's feelings. Brilliant story, however. :) I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() I just adore this story - thank you for sharing. I have enjoyed the characters as they grew, and the lack of smut is appreciated! |
![]() ![]() What a great story! Poor Draco...just the right amount of angst. |