Reviews for In Your Dreams
Guest chapter 16 . 6/27/2017
I realize I have come to this story quite late, and I can't believe I missed reading this until now. I am totally enjoying it. I love these types of marriage stories, and yours is turning out very entertaining.
Those infernal 'revealing' flannel pajamas of Hermione's. Poor Severus-already deeply in love with her and trying desperately to hold himself back, keep it all together & not let anyone (least of all Hermione) know. Meanwhile Hermione having adult-rated fantasies about her mean, maddening husband.
Simply delicious. I hope you go on as well as you've started. I should be doing chores instead of reading on to the second half, but here I am.
kate1309 chapter 32 . 6/9/2017
Thank you for writing this incredible story as well. Your stories are absolutely amazing and I can't help but want to read more. Thank you for all the time and effort you out into making this story what it is. I can't wait to read the next story. Your stories are so intriguing and inspiring. I hope one day I can write at least one story as marvelous as one of yours. Good luck with all of your other stories. Thank you for sharing your talent with the world.
Erimenthe chapter 32 . 4/30/2017
Absolutely brilliant. I love the way you manage to actually make everyone (eventually) think about what the others are actually doing instead of what they THINK they are doing. While they may not all end up being friends, they may actually be able to be civil, if not friendly, while in each others company. I like the fact that Neville people watched and was able to help along the way with his insights.

I'm glad that you didn't automatically make Hermione act so differently because she's now married and "of age" in both worlds. With so many things happening all at once and only a few months of her and Severus being married, and still learning about each other, it would have been more of a reason to think she'd been Imperio'd (Imperiused?) lmao. Married or not, of age or not, she was still just 17/18 and with everything they'd been through since 11 and it would have been so fake. I would believe it of Neville with his people watching, but not her or the others.

Hopefully I'll get to read more stories like this one from you soon.
Fguijgdrhvfui chapter 32 . 4/17/2017
What a fantastic story! Loved it.
Guest chapter 32 . 4/13/2017
Maaaaaan, I'd love to read a Draco/Hermione story written by you.

This was a great fanfic. I loved the creativity and the plot. Would have loved for it to have been half-again as long! Great job!
Guest chapter 28 . 4/12/2017
Thank you for allowing Severus and Hermione to retain some grace and dignity when it comes to their bedroom activities. Kudos!
Guest chapter 24 . 4/12/2017
I'd love to have read more about Hermione teaching/how her classes were going, how HER classes were going, how interaction with Severus in front of all the students and in front of a few students went as they became more accustomed to each other, that kind of thing, up to this point.
Guest chapter 21 . 4/12/2017
That didn't make a lot of sense.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/12/2017
LMAO! 5-year-old Hermione loves to needle and push Severus, doesn't she.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/12/2017
Is Hermione still 14 years old? She acts like it sometimes.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/12/2017
Eh, I can't stand a dripping-dishrag-Hermione.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/12/2017
I hope Severus is good at transfiguring couches into beds.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/12/2017
No, honestly, reasonable parents who actually give a damn about their teenage daughter would not be conned into believing a marriage without chance for divorce (which is total bullshit, btw) between their teenage daughter and a far too old asshole teacher would in any realm be considered a GOOD idea.

The amount of "suspended disbelief" this fic requires is staggering, but your writing is really good.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/12/2017
I never did understand why old Dumbfuck was so dead set against Severus teaching the one class he'd always wanted TO teach. Can't let Severus have something he wants? I can't stand Dumbfuck.
DragonIris chapter 5 . 2/20/2017
Considering this fic was written almost 10 years ago, you may not even continue to read these reviews. Still, I just had to say how impressed I am with this chapter. When I first read the initial chapter and the statute that was going to be used as a justification for the marriage, I honestly thought you were really reaching and didn't think you could make it at all plausible but, damn, did you you ever! As someone who rants and raves about flimsy or nonsensical plots and devices that insult the intelligence, I am very impressed. Bravo!
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