I love how you write Severus. So wonderful.

Wow - now that was a surpising, but brilliant idea for a final battle! Absolutely loved it!

Hermione is redeeming herself ;)
I like your Neville and Draco, too. And you have an interesting and valiant explanation for Harry's and Draco's relationship.

She's not unreasonable, she's whiny and annoying. Saying 'sorry' and continuing right where she left off. And she' horribly obtuse, too.

I'm enjoying the story so far, and I really like your Severus. But I'm afraid I don't like Hermione much. She is acting very childish, and I have a feeling it's getting worse. She seemed more mature in the beginning of the novel. Was that your intention? If so, I wonder why. I doesn't really make any sense at this point.

I greatly enjoyed reading this, was 2 days well spent.

At least she's finding out more about him, not that he's enjoying her prodding. Good chapter, thank you! :)

The Neville and Draco part was very insightful, I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for this chapter! :)

Ooo, I like intimate moments like this! Very nice! Love it! Thank you! :)

Hehe, love it! Going back and forth with each other. Very nice chapter, thank you! :)

I imagine one might get addicted to Dreamless Sleep Potions just like many people are addicted to sleeping pills. That last part, though! Part of him wants that sort of interaction. I would imagine that he hasn't received a whole lot of it during his life. Very good chapter, thank you! :3

That went well X) I like this first part "Never doubt it". Thank you for this chapter! :)

Hmm... what to do, what to do. What are you going to do now Hermione? Looking forward to how this rule plays out later. Thank you for this chapter :)

Well, that's a very lovely gift! I hope Draco comes to terms with this as he will be stuck with this Godmother indefinitely. Good chapter, well written, thank you :)

Uh oh. More drama X) Love your writing! Thank you for this chapter! :)