I think it may take a while before they all warm up more to this relationship. I am looking forward to advancement in romance though. Also, I really do like the emotional honesty you gave to Hermione. Thank you for this chapter :)

Well, this is going to be fun, their arguing and banterings. They already had a few sparks flying X) I hope the students can respect her. Good chapter, thank you :)

I like the wedding :3 Well done with this chapter, thank you :)

To tell you the truth, I also went through something very similar. The clincher for us was divine intervention. Very good chapter, well written, thank you :)

Oh! I forgot to mention that I like the idea of their marriage. Seems quite believable. I also like the dream prophecy, how you wrote it poetically. I also enjoyed this chapter, especially by how much Hermione already understands about him. I think we both like Snape for similar reasons, we want him to be happy. Good chapter, thank you :)

Very nicely done! I think your pretty spot on with the characters. Looking forward t reading more! Thank you for this chapter! :D

I quite liked this chapter! Good job with the arguing. For some reason, I knew she was going to grab his arm or his hand, and then, she did. Nice job, thank you for this chapter! :)

Well, this ought to be interesting. Nice idea :)

Well like an idiot I started reading this at 10 pm last night. I only ended up getting a few hours sleep after my eyes stopped being able to focus at all. Had to finish it once I started because it was all the addictive. The initial premise seemed a little out there to me, but I got on board quickly and was rewarded handsomely with some amazing character development and perfect dialogue. Great job.

I really enjoyed this.

Loved it! Thanks!

After re-reading this for the umpteenth time (it's one of my favorite stories ever) I started to get confused about something. Was the vampire attack on St. Mungo's part of the plan, and was Neville part of the plan, as a way to get Hermione out of the way? Or was it unplanned and did they just improvise to their advantage at the last minute?

This was excellent. I should have gone to bed hours ago, but I just couldn't set it aside!
Thank you for a wonderful story

I love your Severus! He's properly slippery, and closed-off enough to go right up Hermione's nose. This is great fun to read

Not liking whiney, teary Hermione. I'm totally empathizing with Severus at this point.

(I read your explanation a ways back and, to be fair, I didn't like Hermione when she was whiney and teary in canon, either.)