|Reviews for Tifa and Aeris romantic action story|
| writerjunkie chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Hey I think this story has a lot of potential into becoming a great story. Though to be honest I feel that the beginning is a bit of a summary or a prologue. Things need to be a little slower paced and fleshed out. Don't give up though because I really do like this idea and keep up the work.
| Sanzi chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Well, not much action, but still kind of humorous) Cute story, I'd say.
| Daemon hunter chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
Well I don't think you can call this an action story since, well there's no action. You can hardly call this a story either. It's more of a summary. Otherwise I don't have anything to say.