|Reviews for Double Solitaire|
| Shining Dahlia chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
| BisquickBismarck chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
i did like the ending paragraphs; 'twas my favourite part of the whole piece. plenty of veiled non-emotionoh yes, yum.
constructively, i was slightly put off by the constant reference to hair-color-names are just fine-and you did switch tense once or twice. i also was looking for more personal descriptions between the dialogue-possibly more [subtle] actions-for your style of describing is tasty to read and i was quite hungry for it.